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WPC 1438 - Hide and Seek CRITIQUE
Sep 27, 2014 06:37:29   #
St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet
 
bbirch has volunteered their WPC Entry to the Photo Critique Forum* to find out what could have done to make it better. Be nice, but be honest as this will help everyone with their craft. Thank you everyone!

From WPC 1438 - Hide and Seek RESULTS http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest_ratings.jsp?pcnum=136

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Peek-a-boo! After paralleling a male lion in Botswana we circled to get in front of him and were then startled when he came out of the brush right by our Land Rover.
Peek-a-boo! After paralleling a male lion in Botsw...
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Sep 27, 2014 08:38:59   #
Graham Smith Loc: Cambridgeshire UK
 
This would be an excellent portrait of a lion showing how it's colouring blends with it's surroundings, but, and it's a big but, the lion is badly out of focus. The cameras AF has focused on the grass not the lion.

Graham

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Sep 27, 2014 08:43:52   #
bbirch Loc: Frederick, MD
 
Thanks. I can see this but the photo opportunity was a split second. What could I have done to prevent this?

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Sep 27, 2014 08:55:22   #
Graham Smith Loc: Cambridgeshire UK
 
bbirch wrote:
Thanks. I can see this but the photo opportunity was a split second. What could I have done to prevent this?


I understand completely about only having a split second to make the shot, manual focus would be better in a situation like this.

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Sep 27, 2014 09:53:43   #
Uuglypher Loc: South Dakota (East River)
 
Graham Smith wrote:
I understand completely about only having a split second to make the shot, manual focus would be better in a situation like this.


I agree with Graham; MF is the only choice under the circumstances.

Dave

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Sep 28, 2014 07:27:21   #
BrettOssman Loc: near Tampa, Florida
 
Uuglypher wrote:
I agree with Graham; MF is the only choice under the circumstances.

Dave


Would a faster auto-focus help, and one with more focus point options.

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Sep 28, 2014 07:44:30   #
Country's Mama Loc: Michigan
 
BrettOssman wrote:
Would a faster auto-focus help, and one with more focus point options.


I think you are still risking it going for the grass.

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Sep 28, 2014 09:35:37   #
minniev Loc: MIssissippi
 
St3v3M wrote:
bbirch has volunteered their WPC Entry to the Photo Critique Forum* to find out what could have done to make it better. Be nice, but be honest as this will help everyone with their craft. Thank you everyone!

From WPC 1438 - Hide and Seek RESULTS http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest_ratings.jsp?pcnum=136

* If you are new to the Photo Critique Forum please read the Section Rules http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-159520-1.html


Wonderful animal, but your camera's autofocus did you no favors here, it decided to focus on the grass in front of the lion (which is tack sharp) but left this magnificent animal blurred.

I usually keep my camera set on SAF+MF and one focus point for this reason. That way my camera focuses on what it thinks I want based on that one focus point, but I can check it and adjust in a split second with the MF adjustment. Sometimes the blurred stuff in the front still impairs the shot, but at least you've got a fighting chance if the thing you wanted in focus is indeed in focus.

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Sep 28, 2014 11:01:28   #
AzPicLady Loc: Behind the camera!
 
That's usually what happens to me. AF is programmed to get what's in front, no matter how small and insignificant it is. Trying to get it to focus on something else is a bear. And I'm far too slow for manual focus to ever get it done. My shot would have matched yours, most likely.

As far as the contest is concerned, I think perhaps the lion is too obvious to fit the intent of the contest. As I look at other entries, the ones that I would have voted for are far more subtle.

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Sep 28, 2014 11:59:15   #
bbirch Loc: Frederick, MD
 
Thanks to all for great advice. I think I probably would have been too slow to get the shot with manual focus so it just may be one of those times you can't get the shot you wanted. Fortunately we followed this lion for an hour and I got another shot that was published in Shutterbug magazine. You win some and lose some. Great new ideas here for me that I want to try though.

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Sep 28, 2014 13:17:54   #
Uuglypher Loc: South Dakota (East River)
 
bbirch wrote:
Thanks to all for great advice. I think I probably would have been too slow to get the shot with manual focus so it just may be one of those times you can't get the shot you wanted. Fortunately we followed this lion for an hour and I got another shot that was published in Shutterbug magazine. You win some and lose some. Great new ideas here for me that I want to try though.

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Hey, bbirch; you are a published photographer!
lose a bit...win a lot!

Congratulations!

Dave in SD

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Sep 28, 2014 13:29:57   #
Nightski
 
I have to agree with Graham on this one. The blurred lion is a shot killer for me. Love the light, the colors, the crop ... it's just too bad that the focus wasn't on the lion. He is the subject.

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