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Sep 21, 2011 00:43:44   #
gessman Loc: Colorado
 
FuzMuz wrote:
Your very welcome - If you have Elements 9 you could try stitching the sequence togther in a sudo panoramic. Then play with the result. I am retired and tend to forget that others don't have my kind of free time to play with their photos.


Good idea. I don't have 9 - have been using 2 for years. Don't recall running into stitching but I think I have a stitching program. In fact, I think some of the Canon software that came with my camera allows that. I really don't play with my pics very much. I tend to spend too much time shooting when not doing this. I just don't know if I have the image back to the first touchdown point. That water patters isn't probably going to be easy to match up. Would be a good puzzle, eh? I, too, am retired so time isn't an issue with me either. Thanks and I'll see if I can't pursue it further.

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Sep 21, 2011 01:02:34   #
APhelpsPhoto Loc: Indiana
 
I LOVE the goose. If you have Photoshop try To use 'High Pass' and turn it up to 250 pixels. I know it sounds strange...but I did this with a photo I took of a Lab out while we were hunting and everyone who sees it wants it and wants to know how I did it. I tried it with your photo (hope you don't mind, I didn't keep it) but it darkens the really bright colors a bit.
But I would hang it the way you have it! :)

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Sep 21, 2011 01:19:46   #
gessman Loc: Colorado
 
APhelpsPhoto wrote:
I LOVE the goose. If you have Photoshop try To use 'High Pass' and turn it up to 250 pixels. I know it sounds strange...but I did this with a photo I took of a Lab out while we were hunting and everyone who sees it wants it and wants to know how I did it. I tried it with your photo (hope you don't mind, I didn't keep it) but it darkens the really bright colors a bit.
But I would hang it the way you have it! :)


Thanks. I'd like to see what it looked like as you corrected it. I use Elements 2 I've had for years and know nothing about PS and "high pass." Have no idea what it does. I've been hunting a reason to get PS but I really don't do all that much editing. Give me a reason. I'm serious. Thanks.

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Sep 21, 2011 02:02:27   #
Yooper Loc: U.P. Michigan
 
gessman wrote:
I meant to induce a feeling of tension and thought the best way to do that was put her too close to the leading edge. I guess we can't always convey what we desire without causing an imbalance somewhere.


Well, gessman, I think you succeeded nicely, and I think that tension helps to make this image for me; I think I prefer it the way it is because it is moving. If it was just swimming, I don't think I would like it, but this works for me. The goose, on the other hand, not so much.

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Sep 21, 2011 02:24:32   #
gessman Loc: Colorado
 
Yooper wrote:
gessman wrote:
I meant to induce a feeling of tension and thought the best way to do that was put her too close to the leading edge. I guess we can't always convey what we desire without causing an imbalance somewhere.


Well, gessman, I think you succeeded nicely, and I think that tension helps to make this image for me; I think I prefer it the way it is because it is moving. If it was just swimming, I don't think I would like it, but this works for me. The goose, on the other hand, not so much.
quote=gessman I meant to induce a feeling of ten... (show quote)


Thank you sir. I agree about that ol' goose. It just wasn't very exciting. I've got to remember to get in there and see if I can tone it down a little and see how it looks. Digital really does some unusual things to some images compared with film, which I suppose did some equally but different things almost as strange as digital. You're up a little late tonight. Seems like several folks are up late on the forum, more so at this hour than I think I've previously seen. Wonder what's troubling folks so they can't sleep.

I'm heading for the sack soon myself. Got to go see my cardiologist in the morning early and don't want to be all tired out. He'll want to slap me in the hospital and shoot me full of fluids. :-) Can't have that. I'd miss the next chapter of "As the Ugly Hedgehog Turns." 'night.

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Sep 21, 2011 02:43:17   #
APhelpsPhoto Loc: Indiana
 
There is no reason for you to need it. You have amazing photos. The one of the goose I am just in love with. The colors are great...my way does'nt improve it. It just gives a different, I guess more 'artsy' view to it. I'll work on it and post it if you want. But as I said before, it won't improve the picture! :)

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Sep 21, 2011 03:03:08   #
mortonfarm Loc: Texas
 
gessman wrote:
SQUIRL033 wrote:
the rule of thirds is a guideline, not a hard and fast law. most images look better when the composition makes use of those guidelines, but there are certainly viable exceptions and reasons to ignore the rule of thirds.

that said, i'm not sure the merganser shot shouldn't have more in front for the bird to move into. you can still show the wake behind, perhaps not as much, and you might need to take a wider crop to do it, but this one's just a bit too cramped on the right.

the goose shot is okay as it is. you've got some nice colors, including that blue wake, but it could benefit from a bit less contrast and some judicious toning down of the bright spots... the whites on the goose are a bit too hot.
the rule of thirds is a guideline, not a hard and ... (show quote)


Thank you. I can already tell that I'm going to enjoy this thread. The merganser is an in camera crop. I didn't take anything off and shot it that way on purpose. I'd have to clone in more water in front and above her which will what, change the perspective and push back and diminish my attempt to get as much of the action in the frame as possible. I guess enough to back her up. How far? ...to the rule of 3rds point on the still short side of the pic? If you have the time, please pull it in and show me what you have in mind and put it back out here. I would sincerely appreciate it. There's violence connected with their landing and I was hoping to convey that they pretty much land out of control and nearly run off the end of the landing strip. I guess I missed.
quote=SQUIRL033 the rule of thirds is a guideline... (show quote)

IDK...made me kinda wonder what was coming up behind him...tho I do agree that there could be just a little more water in front of him...but if it isn't there it just isnt there huh? I don't know anything about edge extensions, haven't moved into that yet. I do agree that the white in the 2nd shot is too white...at least for my taste....but the Canadian Geese are so regal appearing...!I like your photos and the way you kinda challange others to think and apply it to their own work...Linda

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Sep 21, 2011 05:53:05   #
bobmielke Loc: Portland, OR
 
gessman wrote:
Hey folks, if I'm over-working ya and need to slow down or give it a break, please let me know. I have wrestled with these two shots and whether I should like 'em or not. this first shot is a little less complicated than the other one, I think, so I'll get it out of the way first.

This female common Merganser is coming in for a landing and has just skidded a little on the surface of the water and then slowed down but hasn't yet settled onto the water's surface. Is this a case where it is prudent and acceptable to show a moving subject as moving out of the image rather than into it?

The Canada Goose is in a extraordinarily colorful state in some surreal looking water. Digital sometimes does some real goofy stuff like this when the light is hitting it just right. Is this "too" much or can it get away with being called "natural?"
Hey folks, if I'm over-working ya and need to slow... (show quote)


Bravo! I really like your first image. It's interesting to the point of being humorous while showing motion in your composition. It's nicely exposed and sharp. Well done!

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Sep 21, 2011 07:32:17   #
Carmen Loc: Northeast Georgia
 
mommy115 wrote:
Bob, the Merganser is not obeying the rule of thirds but I love that shot. It would be nice if there was a little more space in front of her but there is no way I wouldn't keep that photo if it was mine. It shows such movement and personality!


I agree. I would prefer more space in front, but the detail of everything else makes up for it. I also like the second one, but would like to see someone play with the tones, just a little bit.

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Sep 21, 2011 13:41:10   #
mommy115 Loc: California
 
APhelpsPhoto wrote:
There is no reason for you to need it. You have amazing photos. The one of the goose I am just in love with. The colors are great...my way does'nt improve it. It just gives a different, I guess more 'artsy' view to it. I'll work on it and post it if you want. But as I said before, it won't improve the picture! :)


Hi...I had never even seen the high pass category before. It does have an interesting effect although it will take some time before I really understand when one would use it. Do you have any suggestions for types of photos one would use it for?

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Sep 21, 2011 14:51:03   #
tilde531 Loc: Seaford Delaware
 
gessman wrote:


1. Things might be better if I were to always follow the rules but my problem with that is that I tend to shoot things that move and moving things don't always understand "the rules." When I morph into Dr. Doolittle, maybe things'll change for the good.

2. Thank you, profusely!

3. "Can...should," that's right. No reason to start now. :-)

4. Over-cooked goose. Never a fav of mine. As I said earlier, I don't recall cooking this one at all. I don't cook every shot. Some actually stand alone as created. I do have the "highest quality" settings on my camera cranked way up an now and then on occasion everything comes together, light, angle, exposure, etc., and causes an overkill. I don't shoot raw generally, simply .jpg and don't spend a lot of time post processing. I have a version of PS Elements Ver 2, that came with my last camera several years ago, and it doesn't have all the tools the current ver has, what ver 9 we're up to now so I can't do some things and don't want to do others. Haven't, for instance, done "layers" as of yet. I'm just a loose cannon out there firing away and trying to remember everything I've read while my goose is floating out of range. Spontaneous, I think they call that.

5. I love Mergansers, especially the female and that red head.

6. They're not tumblers as such but they have extremely short wings, comparatively, and bigger bodies and fly very fast with a high wing flap rev. They're far from graceful and it would seem as though it is an extreme effort for them to even fly in the first place. When they come in to land they toss their bodies into a controlled slide. I would bet that if they did the same on land they would tumble but I've never seen one of them on land. I don't think they spend much time out of the water. I've included a couple of shots of three males taking off, not for critique but to show the other half. They're really fast and hard to catch. I've yet to get a male taking off, flying, or landing that I'm happy with. These were shot with my older EOS 20D, 8 mpx, and 400 non IS lens, hand held. The last of these three pics is the redhead landing again. I was in burst mode and as she slid through the frame I got several shots. I just happen to prefer the first one I posted because I thought it best represented the action of the bird landing.

7. I like your profile pic, a lot. Let's see, I'm in here to critique and be critiqued, right. Your profile pic, I don't think a little more skin would be offensive, at all, and... :twisted:
br br 1. Things might be better if I were to al... (show quote)


*blushes*
You are sooo cool... hehe.

Thanks for that last photo of the red-head, here, too!
I think if I were a bird... I'd probably be a lot like her! LOL

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Sep 21, 2011 17:11:44   #
gessman Loc: Colorado
 
APhelpsPhoto wrote:
There is no reason for you to need it. You have amazing photos. The one of the goose I am just in love with. The colors are great...my way does'nt improve it. It just gives a different, I guess more 'artsy' view to it. I'll work on it and post it if you want. But as I said before, it won't improve the picture! :)


Thank you and absolutely, I'd like to see your vision of the goose. I'm not a very artistic person and am open to all suggestions. Thanks again.

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Sep 21, 2011 17:15:54   #
liv2paddle Loc: Wall, NJ
 
beautiful light..wonderful colors on all the creatures..I agree just a smidge of room in front is nice..but your certainly nailed the exposure.

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Sep 21, 2011 17:20:44   #
gessman Loc: Colorado
 
mortonfarm wrote:
gessman wrote:
SQUIRL033 wrote:
the rule of thirds is a guideline, not a hard and fast law. most images look better when the composition makes use of those guidelines, but there are certainly viable exceptions and reasons to ignore the rule of thirds.

that said, i'm not sure the merganser shot shouldn't have more in front for the bird to move into. you can still show the wake behind, perhaps not as much, and you might need to take a wider crop to do it, but this one's just a bit too cramped on the right.

the goose shot is okay as it is. you've got some nice colors, including that blue wake, but it could benefit from a bit less contrast and some judicious toning down of the bright spots... the whites on the goose are a bit too hot.
the rule of thirds is a guideline, not a hard and ... (show quote)


Thank you. I can already tell that I'm going to enjoy this thread. The merganser is an in camera crop. I didn't take anything off and shot it that way on purpose. I'd have to clone in more water in front and above her which will what, change the perspective and push back and diminish my attempt to get as much of the action in the frame as possible. I guess enough to back her up. How far? ...to the rule of 3rds point on the still short side of the pic? If you have the time, please pull it in and show me what you have in mind and put it back out here. I would sincerely appreciate it. There's violence connected with their landing and I was hoping to convey that they pretty much land out of control and nearly run off the end of the landing strip. I guess I missed.
quote=SQUIRL033 the rule of thirds is a guideline... (show quote)

IDK...made me kinda wonder what was coming up behind him...tho I do agree that there could be just a little more water in front of him...but if it isn't there it just isnt there huh? I don't know anything about edge extensions, haven't moved into that yet. I do agree that the white in the 2nd shot is too white...at least for my taste....but the Canadian Geese are so regal appearing...!I like your photos and the way you kinda challange others to think and apply it to their own work...Linda
quote=gessman quote=SQUIRL033 the rule of thirds... (show quote)


Thank you Linda. I've toned down the goose as you'll see. As for the merganser, I've got to see if I can find my sequence of that to see what's available to me.

Before...
Before......

After...
After......

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Sep 21, 2011 17:28:45   #
APhelpsPhoto Loc: Indiana
 
I've been fooling around with it for a bit and everything I do takes the colors out of the water and keeps the brightness of the goose. I'll try a few more things and then post them up here. I also just uploaded a new topic called High Pass with an example of what I was thinking. It's of a dog...but more the colors

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