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lighthouse Loc: No Fixed Abode

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MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

Thanks for being in such a good team.

Neubee wrote:

I agree all the way with Sharp Shooter..

MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

Thanks for your attempt to improve my picture. Unfortunatelly You did not check 'store original' box. It would be easier to compare 2 versions.

lighthouse wrote:

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Bret Loc: Dayton Ohio

Other than changing your vantage point...not allot of help I think.

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lighthouse Loc: No Fixed Abode

MMC wrote:

Thanks for your attempt to improve my picture. Unfortunatelly You did not check 'store original' box. It would be easier to compare 2 versions.

You do not need "store original" to see the suggested change in composition.

MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

Thank you, Bret. I am glad that such crop is not so bad, but I did not try to shoot only monument, I wanted to show place where this monument was placed. BTW the name of this monument is "This is The place". I took many pictures of it to see details, but it was not the best time of the day for shooting, sun was very strong.As an example I can show one piece of this monument.

Bret wrote:

Other than changing your vantage point...not allot of help I think.

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MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

No problem.

lighthouse wrote:

You do not need "store original" to see the suggested change in composition.

davidrb Loc: Half way there on the 45th Parallel

MMC wrote:

What is your opinion about composition of this picture? If you do not like it you can crop it.

I might move toward the monument and set up a shot utilizing the next light pole. There is still one more pole after that, but I think you may run out of room. As this is, there is no subject to catch my attention. The tree blocks the monument from being that subject. Seems like an undeveloped story that never goes anywhere.

MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

Thanks for looking and your comment. My mistake in the posting this picture is that I did not explained my goal to take this picture. I gave this explanation to Bret.

davidrb wrote:

I might move toward the monument and set up a shot utilizing the next light pole. There is still one more pole after that, but I think you may run out of room. As this is, there is no subject to catch my attention. The tree blocks the monument from being that subject. Seems like an undeveloped story that never goes anywhere.

artBob Loc: Near Chicago

It COULD be cropped for MANY different effects. As you've done it, the "monumentalism" of the monument, it is outstanding. The monument is distant but dominating, somewhat mysterious behind the grove, set in an awe-inspiring space. Good work!

MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

Thank you very much.

artBob wrote:

It COULD be cropped for MANY different effects. As you've done it, the "monumentalism" of the monument, it is outstanding. The monument is distant but dominating, somewhat mysterious behind the grove, set in an awe-inspiring space. Good work!

Drigby1 Loc: American Fork, UT

MMC wrote:

What is your opinion about composition of this picture? If you do not like it you can crop it.

Looks like the This is the Place Brigham Young Pioneer monument above Salt Lake City.

MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

Thanks for looking. I am glad that you recognized it. What is your opinion about this picture composition?

Drigby1 wrote:

Looks like the This is the Place Brigham Young Pioneer monument above Salt Lake City.

Drigby1 Loc: American Fork, UT

MMC wrote:

Thanks for looking. I am glad that you recognized it. What is your opinion about this picture composition?

Good view, I would move myself further so there was a little space between
The tree and the monument. Otherwise I like it.

MMC Loc: Brooklyn NY

Thanks for looking and your advice.

Drigby1 wrote:

Good view, I would move myself further so there was a little space between
The tree and the monument. Otherwise I like it.