St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet

Photos by Paula has volunteered their WPC 1429 - Scream for Ice Cream entry to the Photo Critique Forum* to find out what could have done to make it better. Be nice, but be honest as this will help everyone with their craft. Thank you Photos by Paula and thank you everyone!

From WPC 1429 - Scream for Ice Cream RESULTS http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest_ratings.jsp?pcnum=127

* If you are new to the Photo Critique Forum please read the Section Rules http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-159520-1.html

"I scream, you scream, we all scream for ice cream"". An ice cold treat on a hot summers day.

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Graham Smith Loc: Cambridgeshire UK

I see this is an IPhone photograph, not that it makes any difference to my thoughts on the image. I like the picture, it is close to excellent. I do think the the colours should be brighter particularly the reds, the lemon is nearly there.
The half cherry needs to be a whole cherry, the stalk of the uppermost cherry wanted trimming by at least half it's length and the stalk passing across the lower cherry ought to be cloned out. Perhaps the lemon pip ought to be removed too. There is also a little untidiness in the bottom right corner.
Having said all that it is a really good effort.

Photos by Paula

Thanks Graham for your critique on my photo. I have a Canon camera, but also love using my Iphone. Thanks for pointing out those details. Close to excellent, Ill take!