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Sep 18, 2011 17:21:03   #
modest genius Loc: joshua tree park CA
 
Tips to improve please.







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Sep 18, 2011 18:13:56   #
Zane Baker
 
Your first and third shots are under exposed, check your meter and if your camera shows a histogram look at it for a full exposure range from right to left.
these pictures show a falloff in the highlights, the right side of the histogram. My guess is the meter was reading light colored sand and that is why you got a under exposure, snow will do the same thing. The middle shot is spot on for exposure but I would have composed the photo differently by not placing the main subject in the middle of the frame. Try cropping into the photo moving her to the right and having less sky. If I could attach samples I could show you what I I have in mind.

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Sep 18, 2011 18:32:12   #
bobmielke Loc: Portland, OR
 
Check for whites and blacks

Original - Unedited
Original - Unedited...

Enhanced with above suggestions
Enhanced with above suggestions...

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Sep 18, 2011 19:16:36   #
modest genius Loc: joshua tree park CA
 
Thanx again. Seem to have managed to post twice......

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Sep 18, 2011 19:19:52   #
modest genius Loc: joshua tree park CA
 
Thanx Zane. Must try and remember the rule of thirds!

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Sep 18, 2011 19:39:10   #
bobmielke Loc: Portland, OR
 
modest genius wrote:
Thanx again. Seem to have managed to post twice......


This is the first time it has happened to me but it's common on this forum. Beware! LOL

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