Another from my photo-shoot
Nov 10, 2013 19:47:16 #
Nov 10, 2013 19:54:49 #
Philip00165 wrote:
I had liked this photo from my latest model shoot.
What do you think?
Philip
What do you think?
Philip
Like your shot....Just a suggestion to SELL her......crop maybe just below the red belt and just above her head. This would concentrate more on her as a model. Just a suggestion.
Nov 10, 2013 20:55:54 #
Nov 10, 2013 21:04:55 #
Most likely not your fault, but sleeveless tops are the curse of this type of image. That shoulder/upper arm is HUGE and it is brighter than her face. It is seldom if ever a good idea to shoot directly into a bare shoulder.
Her face lacks fill from flash or reflector so the eyes have no life to them at all and her face is the darkest thing in the image.
I guess I understand the pose but as a general rule, it is not a good idea to have finger pointed directly at the camera.
Her face lacks fill from flash or reflector so the eyes have no life to them at all and her face is the darkest thing in the image.
I guess I understand the pose but as a general rule, it is not a good idea to have finger pointed directly at the camera.
Nov 10, 2013 22:27:02 #
Philip00165 wrote:
I had liked this photo from my latest model shoot.
What do you think?
Philip
What do you think?
Philip
She has a pretty cute expression on her face, I love her hair, but that is not a flattering position for her arm.
Nov 11, 2013 09:23:36 #
Nov 13, 2013 08:53:33 #
CaptainC wrote:
Most likely not your fault, but sleeveless tops are the curse of this type of image. That shoulder/upper arm is HUGE and it is brighter than her face. It is seldom if ever a good idea to shoot directly into a bare shoulder.
Her face lacks fill from flash or reflector so the eyes have no life to them at all and her face is the darkest thing in the image.
I guess I understand the pose but as a general rule, it is not a good idea to have finger pointed directly at the camera.
Her face lacks fill from flash or reflector so the eyes have no life to them at all and her face is the darkest thing in the image.
I guess I understand the pose but as a general rule, it is not a good idea to have finger pointed directly at the camera.
Phillip,
I agree with CaptainC. He has helped me some months ago and his advice and knowledge is something to behold. The first thing I noticed was the darkness of her face and the brightness of the palm of her hand. Also, as mentioned before, her shoulder does seem to take up a lot of the 'space' in the photo. The idea and/or concept is fine, but it just needs refined a bit. :)
I do like the sunshine highlighting her hair on top of her head. I question if the fly away hair is from a breeze and a wanted feature - personal choice and what you were going for in the image. As I have been told many times, practice, practice, practice and try to get all your ducks in a row before snapping that shutter release on your camera. :) A very nice concept for the photo.
Tom
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