Beautiful Suzie
Nov 10, 2013 01:55:30 #
Nov 10, 2013 08:12:58 #
The pixilation?? in the second one does her no justice and really detracts from her as the subject. Makes me want to look at her hand, not her.
Nov 10, 2013 11:14:30 #
Singing Swan wrote:
The pixilation?? in the second one does her no justice and really detracts from her as the subject. Makes me want to look at her hand, not her.
Thanks Singing Swan for your opinion and taking the time to give it. I ran a filter on it to get that texture going, then took it off the subject. I wasn't sure how this one would be received, but it's good to get other photographer's opinions. Thanks again.
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Nov 10, 2013 20:08:47 #
There's something about the light in the first shot that almost makes "Suzie" look like she's floating. I'm also wondering whether you have a little too much empty space on the right. I seem to recall something about more formal portraits having the farthest eye on the center line (bear in mind that I'm not a portrait photographer, so I may be way off on this). Other than that, I think it's quite good.
Second one doesn't quite work for me.
Third is quite nice.
Lately, I've been evaluating photos by whether I would buy it. If it doesn't pass the "purchase" test for some reason, then I have to figure out why. If I were Suzie, I'd buy the third one.
Second one doesn't quite work for me.
Third is quite nice.
Lately, I've been evaluating photos by whether I would buy it. If it doesn't pass the "purchase" test for some reason, then I have to figure out why. If I were Suzie, I'd buy the third one.
Nov 11, 2013 00:37:02 #
vicksart wrote:
There's something about the light in the first sho... (show quote)
Thanks Vicki for voicing your opinion and making your comments. Suzie doesn't have to buy anything, I am giving all the photos to her parents for being such good people.
Nov 11, 2013 22:54:58 #
vicksart wrote:
There's something about the light in the first sho... (show quote)
Vicki, I have to agree with you on everything.
Nov 14, 2013 16:21:06 #
BrentHarder wrote:
Here is Beautiful Suzie........
I have to agree with Vicki, and I think that Suzie looks a tad uncomfortable in no 1.
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Nov 14, 2013 18:27:43 #
nanaval wrote:
This comes from her position. Had she used her hands to support herself against the horizontal trunk she would not have been so stiff.I have to agree with Vicki, and I think that Suzie looks a tad uncomfortable in no 1.
The whole impression you have come from there: Misuse of the hands. The slit skirt does not help her either to look comfortable, she slips and she flashes...
The safety pin she uses in picture two has obviously failed!!! :oops: :shock: :shock:
Nov 14, 2013 21:28:24 #
The sun set is supposed to come from the right so why is it showing through the branches in picture #3?
Weird
Weird
Nov 16, 2013 12:19:24 #
nanaval wrote:
I have to agree with Vicki, and I think that Suzie looks a tad uncomfortable in no 1.
Good point nanaval.......I agree!
Nov 16, 2013 12:21:15 #
Rongnongno wrote:
This comes from her position. Had she used her hands to support herself against the horizontal trunk she would not have been so stiff.
The whole impression you have come from there: Misuse of the hands. The slit skirt does not help her either to look comfortable, she slips and she flashes...
The safety pin she uses in picture two has obviously failed!!! :oops: :shock: :shock:
The whole impression you have come from there: Misuse of the hands. The slit skirt does not help her either to look comfortable, she slips and she flashes...
The safety pin she uses in picture two has obviously failed!!! :oops: :shock: :shock:
Good points on everything you have said. And Just FYI: She just came from the beach and was wearing a bathing suit under the skirt. No one else would know this but me!
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Nov 16, 2013 12:23:20 #
Rongnongno wrote:
The sun set is supposed to come from the right so why is it showing through the branches in picture #3?
Weird
Weird
I had a remote flash going off on the right side. Yes, it is weird and I am still learning so I appreciate all the CC coments that you give. It brings everything to my attention what I need to think about in the future. So, thanks for your comments!
Nov 16, 2013 12:31:12 #
BrentHarder wrote:
TMIGood points on everything you have said. And Just FYI: She just came from the beach and was wearing a bathing suit under the skirt. No one else would know this but me!
:oops: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Nov 19, 2013 11:45:53 #
BrentHarder wrote:
Here is Beautiful Suzie........
Yes she is, and that's quite a tree. Nice pictures.
Dec 15, 2013 23:44:31 #
Rongnongno wrote:
TMI
:oops: :lol: :lol: :lol:
:oops: :lol: :lol: :lol:
To much information? But you want to know the truth don't you?
I know, I know, you didn't want to know that she was wearing a bathing suit under there did you? lol
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