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Nov 7, 2013 07:13:00   #
larrywilk Loc: Palm Harbor, FL
 
Took this yesterday and had bright yellow glare from grass? blades in foreground. After cloning them out what else would be recommended?



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Nov 7, 2013 08:28:13   #
ebrunner Loc: New Jersey Shore
 
I would leave it alone. If I wanted to get really nit picky, I might blow up the image to the point of individual pixels and use the sharpen tool on the iris of the eye only. That sometimes helps an image like a portrait or birds where the eye is soooo important.

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Nov 7, 2013 09:23:05   #
Nightski
 
larrywilk wrote:
Took this yesterday and had bright yellow glare from grass? blades in foreground. After cloning them out what else would be recommended?


Larry, would you have a chance to capture the bird at a different angle? This angle doesn't really show off the bird. The foliage is distracting. I think angle is you biggest problem here.

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Nov 7, 2013 10:29:49   #
larrywilk Loc: Palm Harbor, FL
 
ebrunner wrote:
I would leave it alone. If I wanted to get really nit picky, I might blow up the image to the point of individual pixels and use the sharpen tool on the iris of the eye only. That sometimes helps an image like a portrait or birds where the eye is soooo important.


I'll give it a try. Thanks

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Nov 7, 2013 10:33:45   #
larrywilk Loc: Palm Harbor, FL
 
Nightski wrote:
Larry, would you have a chance to capture the bird at a different angle? This angle doesn't really show off the bird. The foliage is distracting. I think angle is you biggest problem here.


Unfortunately, no. I was standing on tip-toe and leaning across a fence to eliminate the foliage as much as possible. My other shot hid the tip of his tail feathers. Thanks for the comment. I'll watch for him in that area.

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Nov 7, 2013 12:30:29   #
Heirloom Tomato Loc: Oregon
 
larrywilk wrote:
Took this yesterday and had bright yellow glare from grass? blades in foreground. After cloning them out what else would be recommended?


Hi Larry, I did an edit on this and will post it just so you can see what it would look like if some different things were done. I liked your framing, but OOF foreground foliage tends to bother me so I did crop the photo to minimize the foliage. I'm not sure I made an improvement, though. Also, there was a green color cast, so I did some color correction, and added brightness and contrast. Also put a vignette on. I don't think I like the vignetting, but left it on just so you could see what it looks like.



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Nov 7, 2013 12:30:58   #
Heirloom Tomato Loc: Oregon
 
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
Hi Larry, I did an edit on this and will post it just so you can see what it would look like if some different things were done. I liked your framing, but OOF foreground foliage tends to bother me so I did crop the photo to minimize the foliage. I'm not sure I made an improvement, though. Also, there was a green color cast, so I did some color correction, and added brightness and contrast. Also put a vignette on. I don't think I like the vignetting, but left it on just so you could see what it looks like.
Hi Larry, I did an edit on this and will post it j... (show quote)


Whoops, guess I took the vignetting off after all.

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Nov 8, 2013 07:26:57   #
tusketwedge Loc: Nova Scotia Canada
 
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
Whoops, guess I took the vignetting off after all.


I agree with taking out the foliage, the catchlight in the eye.Have you tried cropping the the bird 'inverse so the background is selected and using a level layer darken to make the bird more dominant .

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Nov 8, 2013 20:29:40   #
larrywilk Loc: Palm Harbor, FL
 
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
Hi Larry, I did an edit on this and will post it just so you can see what it would look like if some different things were done. I liked your framing, but OOF foreground foliage tends to bother me so I did crop the photo to minimize the foliage. I'm not sure I made an improvement, though. Also, there was a green color cast, so I did some color correction, and added brightness and contrast. Also put a vignette on. I don't think I like the vignetting, but left it on just so you could see what it looks like.
Hi Larry, I did an edit on this and will post it j... (show quote)


I tried the vignette and did not like it either. I like the color correction. I s that a result of the reflection off the green water? I do like what you did though. Thanks for your time.

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Nov 8, 2013 20:34:47   #
larrywilk Loc: Palm Harbor, FL
 
tusketwedge wrote:
I agree with taking out the foliage, the catchlight in the eye.Have you tried cropping the the bird 'inverse so the background is selected and using a level layer darken to make the bird more dominant .


I usually only crop from original to 8X10 to preserve as many pixels as possible. I know this limits me but it will also help me get more done in camera. I thought about inverting the background or even reducing its exposure to darken it but, being a neophyte, I am still unsure of my capabilities in PP.

Thanks for your thoughts and ideas.

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Nov 8, 2013 20:37:08   #
tusketwedge Loc: Nova Scotia Canada
 
larrywilk wrote:
I usually only crop from original to 8X10 to preserve as many pixels as possible. I know this limits me but it will also help me get more done in camera. I thought about inverting the background or even reducing its exposure to darken it but, being a neophyte, I am still unsure of my capabilities in PP.

Thanks for your thoughts and ideas.


can you tell me what program you use fro pp

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Nov 8, 2013 20:42:47   #
Heirloom Tomato Loc: Oregon
 
larrywilk wrote:
I tried the vignette and did not like it either. I like the color correction. I s that a result of the reflection off the green water? I do like what you did though. Thanks for your time.


I think the green color cast must have come as a reflection from the color of the water. I like the bird color corrected, but I actually preferred the more yellow-green color of the water in your original. You could try the original version but just applying some brightening, without color correcting, to keep the original tones, just a bit brighter. You're very welcome, thanks for letting me work on your beautiful photo.

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Nov 8, 2013 20:48:08   #
larrywilk Loc: Palm Harbor, FL
 
tusketwedge wrote:
can you tell me what program you use fro pp


Mostly Lightroom 4 but I have started to dabble in CS6.

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Nov 8, 2013 20:49:08   #
larrywilk Loc: Palm Harbor, FL
 
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
I think the green color cast must have come as a reflection from the color of the water. I like the bird color corrected, but I actually preferred the more yellow-green color of the water in your original. You could try the original version but just applying some brightening, without color correcting, to keep the original tones, just a bit brighter. You're very welcome, thanks for letting me work on your beautiful photo.


I will try these suggestions. Thank you.

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