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Nov 6, 2013 09:41:15   #
oldtool2 Loc: South Jersey
 
Taken at a local body of water. I couldn't believe he caught this. He did manage to swallow it!

Jim D



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Nov 6, 2013 09:45:39   #
flyguy Loc: Las Cruces, New Mexico
 
Very nice shot. :thumbup:

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Nov 6, 2013 09:50:02   #
oldtool2 Loc: South Jersey
 
flyguy wrote:
Very nice shot. :thumbup:


Thank you! I had a good time that day.

Jim D

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Nov 6, 2013 09:55:33   #
Nightski
 
oldtool2 wrote:
Taken at a local body of water. I couldn't believe he caught this. He did manage to swallow it!

Jim D


This is a great shot. One thing I would want to do is to get the highlights down on the water somehow so that the bird stands out more against his background. It's easy to miss what a Really Great shot this is, because of that.

That's a sunfish he's got, isn't it?

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Nov 6, 2013 09:56:20   #
Chuck_893 Loc: Lincoln, Nebraska, USA
 
oldtool2 wrote:
Taken at a local body of water. I couldn't believe he caught this. He did manage to swallow it! Jim D

They are dinosaurs, aren't they! I love the shot! :thumbup: Crisp, colorful—I do kinda wish that I did not have to enlarge it to see the fish scales to fully grasp what's happening, but that is SO nitpicky. This is a grab shot and you gets what you gets! One other nitpick: would you consider trying to warm up the color? It might not work. The overall blue cast works well. I just wonder what if you did a color cast correction on the water (which I know is reflecting sky, but…), would it ruin the overall look?

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Nov 6, 2013 10:03:22   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
A great catch - for both of you :)

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Nov 6, 2013 10:12:46   #
Racin17 Loc: Western Pa
 
oldtool2 wrote:
Taken at a local body of water. I couldn't believe he caught this. He did manage to swallow it!

Jim D


Very nice shot considering how fast you probably had to work.

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Nov 6, 2013 10:14:06   #
oldtool2 Loc: South Jersey
 
Chuck_893 wrote:
They are dinosaurs, aren't they! I love the shot! :thumbup: Crisp, colorful—I do kinda wish that I did not have to enlarge it to see the fish scales to fully grasp what's happening, but that is SO nitpicky. This is a grab shot and you gets what you gets! One other nitpick: would you consider trying to warm up the color? It might not work. The overall blue cast works well. I just wonder what if you did a color cast correction on the water (which I know is reflecting sky, but…), would it ruin the overall look?
They are dinosaurs, aren't they! I love the shot! ... (show quote)


Is this better? I removed as much as I can, I think any more will effect the color of the GBH.

Jim D



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Nov 6, 2013 10:18:10   #
oldtool2 Loc: South Jersey
 
Nightski wrote:
This is a great shot. One thing I would want to do is to get the highlights down on the water somehow so that the bird stands out more against his background. It's easy to miss what a Really Great shot this is, because of that.

That's a sunfish he's got, isn't it?


Nightski,

I think removing some of the blue cast that Chuck suggested also helped what you suggest. What do you think?

Not sure what kind of fish it is.

Jim D

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Nov 6, 2013 10:22:00   #
oldtool2 Loc: South Jersey
 
Racin17 wrote:
Very nice shot considering how fast you probably had to work.


Thank you! I had been watching him for a while. When he reached down and came up with this he caught me completely off guard!

Jim D

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Nov 6, 2013 10:23:45   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
oldtool2 wrote:
Is this better? I removed as much as I can, I think any more will effect the color of the GBH.

Jim D


Love the color tweak you made :thumbup:

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Nov 6, 2013 11:03:41   #
Chuck_893 Loc: Lincoln, Nebraska, USA
 
oldtool2 wrote:
Is this better? I removed as much as I can, I think any more will effect the color of the GBH. Jim D

This is a puzzlement. I took them both up and toggled between. I still conclude that the original is too blue, but I think the second one is too cyan :evil: . So under the Noo Rules I tried it myself and discovered that it'sa toughie. Here's what I got, the best I could get without selecting specific colors and parts of the picture. I also squidged the white slider over a tad in levels. The picture remains a stunner but seems to want to resist neutralization.



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Nov 6, 2013 11:28:04   #
Nightski
 
Chuck_893 wrote:
This is a puzzlement. I took them both up and toggled between. I still conclude that the original is too blue, but I think the second one is too cyan :evil: . So under the Noo Rules I tried it myself and discovered that it'sa toughie. Here's what I got, the best I could get without selecting specific colors and parts of the picture. I also squidged the white slider over a tad in levels. The picture remains a stunner but seems to want to resist neutralization.


The bird stands out more in this photo.

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Nov 6, 2013 11:54:57   #
oldtool2 Loc: South Jersey
 
Chuck_893 wrote:
This is a puzzlement. I took them both up and toggled between. I still conclude that the original is too blue, but I think the second one is too cyan :evil: . So under the Noo Rules I tried it myself and discovered that it'sa toughie. Here's what I got, the best I could get without selecting specific colors and parts of the picture. I also squidged the white slider over a tad in levels. The picture remains a stunner but seems to want to resist neutralization.


Chuck,

Sounds like the problem I was having. If I took any more of the blue cast out the GBH started to lose its true color so I left it alone. Yours looks a tad better because the white stands out a little more.

Sometimes you just have to settle with what you can get.

Thanks for trying, I do like it!

I have posted a second photo of this GBH.

Jim D

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Nov 6, 2013 12:01:47   #
Wendy2 Loc: California
 
This is fun practicing. I gave it a try. I do most of my editing in Photoshop ACR and finish in CS6.



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