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Nov 4, 2013 12:40:20   #
MtnMan Loc: ID
 
This one is actually more of a pool. Like the others I'd appreciate input on how to improve it, including visuals.



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Nov 4, 2013 13:09:22   #
Heirloom Tomato Loc: Oregon
 
MtnMan wrote:
This one is actually more of a pool. Like the others I'd appreciate input on how to improve it, including visuals.


This one is dazzlingly beautiful. You really captured the mineral-y green in the hot pool and the crusty mineral salts. The only thing I would change would be to clone out the dark spot in the light area near top left. I tried "auto sharpen" and liked the effect. Color, composition and framing all look spot-on to me just as you presented it. Others may have more to say, but I give it :thumbup: :thumbup: .

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Nov 4, 2013 15:03:26   #
Chuck_893 Loc: Lincoln, Nebraska, USA
 
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
This one is dazzlingly beautiful. You really captured the mineral-y green in the hot pool and the crusty mineral salts. ...

I like it very, very much, except for one thing: the polarizer cut all reflections to the point that I cannot tell that it is under water. Looking at it at higher magnification I can see faint ripples (presumably because it's not that hot), but if I have never seen a hot (or at least warm) pool, I may not know what it is I am looking at since there are pretty much zero reflections. The picture stands alone. The colors are wonderful. If I made the picture I might back my polarizer off just a tad to pick up some reflections. :)

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Nov 4, 2013 18:02:43   #
MtnMan Loc: ID
 
Chuck_893 wrote:
I like it very, very much, except for one thing: the polarizer cut all reflections to the point that I cannot tell that it is under water. Looking at it at higher magnification I can see faint ripples (presumably because it's not that hot), but if I have never seen a hot (or at least warm) pool, I may not know what it is I am looking at since there are pretty much zero reflections. The picture stands alone. The colors are wonderful. If I made the picture I might back my polarizer off just a tad to pick up some reflections. :)
I like it very, very much, except for one thing: t... (show quote)


Thanks. I think I have one with steam bubbles. Maybe that would be better to use.

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Nov 4, 2013 19:43:27   #
Old Salt Loc: relocated to Pennsylvania from Maine
 
Wonder what it would of looked like if it had a few water ripples in it from a small stone, or a steam bubble

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Nov 4, 2013 19:58:34   #
lighthouse Loc: No Fixed Abode
 
The shadow of the fence is a definite distraction for me.

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Nov 4, 2013 20:01:49   #
Heirloom Tomato Loc: Oregon
 
lighthouse wrote:
The shadow of the fence is a definite distraction for me.


I rather like it. I like how it changes the background color under the shadow. For me it adds interest without being distracting.

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Nov 4, 2013 20:05:03   #
Nikonian72 Loc: Chico CA
 
I do not mind the lack of surface reflections, nor really the fence shadow. I would like to see the dark triangle (left side) cloned-out, and the white crystals, top & bottom, toned-down a bit. That makes the scene less busy.

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