Wall-E wrote:
It looks like your daughter is headed down, head down, into some funky water.
And, if you're going to show a sequence, then consistency is key.
The same effects, applied to the same degree.
And I see why you had to add the vignette. Your daughter is dead center in some of the images. You're pushing the eye to look at her, rather than leading it.
Maybe recrop to move her to the lower left double-thirds crossing, with the cliff looming above her?
Thanks Wall-E for your suggestions. These photos never were intended to be a sequence. I have many more of her and also my son in law climbing. For me personally, none of the photos bother me at all.......which includes cropping, positioning of the climber in reference to the rest of the image or anything else like textures in the sky. If you would like to play with the images, I give you full persmission to mess with them. I'd like to see what you come up with, so please re-post your reworked images back on this thread! Thanks Wall-E.