One more try evening in the UK
Jul 15, 2013 23:24:03 #
Jul 15, 2013 23:33:06 #
I really like it except for the light colored roof in the lower right. It pulls my eyes right to it. I think if you cloned that out you would have a great result. Not so sure about the tree branch on the left side.
Jul 15, 2013 23:39:30 #
I agree with gmcase; it's a beautiful photo but would look better if you cloned out the roof. (Coming from someone who doens't know how to do any of that stuff!).
Jul 15, 2013 23:44:09 #
JohnMayo wrote:
still learning and love it
Continuing to learn is the best attitude to have. It leads to doing better photographs.
--Bob
Jul 15, 2013 23:46:21 #
JohnMayo wrote:
still learning and love it
The photo is quite striking, quite lovely but the van/car roof is a total distraction.
Jul 16, 2013 06:21:58 #
I think this is a perfect example of "change your angle". You probably could have moved to your left and gotten the entire roofline, which is stunning, without getting the van. I might also give you more of the foliage on the left as a framing agent. Just a hint of foliage is sometimes a distraction. I prefer to use foliage only if it is clear where it is "rooted". Just my take.
Jul 19, 2013 19:51:41 #
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