Sher
Loc: Colorful Colorado
Tell me what you think.......
turn book over. lol like the way the view wall of the fountin leads you around try that with her too. think it will make her stand out more. the concrete seems pronounced
JimH
Loc: Western South Jersey, USA
Presidential Material. It's way overexposed, but you may have been going for that look. Content-wise, A+.
Sherrie wrote:
Tell me what you think.......
LOL great sense of humor... perfect for someone who was voted "Class Clown" or will be remembered for their twisted sense of humor!
For that reason... creativity and uniqueness ... I give it an A+
It's a little too contrast-y for me... is it HDR? If so, that would explain it....
But over all... I think it's really cool and definitely memorable *snickers*
Sher
Loc: Colorful Colorado
JimH wrote:
Presidential Material. It's way overexposed, but you may have been going for that look. Content-wise, A+.
Trying to learn photoshop too....... I guess I will be learning how to not overdo things!!
Sher
Loc: Colorful Colorado
tilde531 wrote:
Sherrie wrote:
Tell me what you think.......
LOL great sense of humor... perfect for someone who was voted "Class Clown" or will be remembered for their twisted sense of humor!
For that reason... creativity and uniqueness ... I give it an A+
It's a little too contrast-y for me... is it HDR? If so, that would explain it....
But over all... I think it's really cool and definitely memorable *snickers*
Thanks Tilde.... I may try to photoshop it again and not go so crazy this time.lol
JimH
Loc: Western South Jersey, USA
Sherrie wrote:
JimH wrote:
Presidential Material. It's way overexposed, but you may have been going for that look. Content-wise, A+.
Trying to learn photoshop too....... I guess I will be learning how to not overdo things!!
See how her forehead is almost pure white? A little too much brightness slider.. ?
Sher
Loc: Colorful Colorado
JimH wrote:
Sherrie wrote:
JimH wrote:
Presidential Material. It's way overexposed, but you may have been going for that look. Content-wise, A+.
Trying to learn photoshop too....... I guess I will be learning how to not overdo things!!
See how her forehead is almost pure white? A little too much brightness slider.. ?
Thank you. Another thing I need to learn is how to read a histogram.
I am not sure exactly what you are looking for.
The idea behind the photo (upside-down book) is cute
the harsh shadows and over exposed skin is..yucky.
Also the leaves n the grass- rake it.
If I was taking this I would use a reflector for fill to reduce shadows
and increase my aperture to blur the background.
And not over process.
I think so as in too corny.
Sher
Loc: Colorful Colorado
Sherrie wrote:
Tell me what you think.......
Okay.....so here is the unedited version
MWAC
Loc: Somewhere East Of Crazy
I really like the idea, there is so much you could do Post with it.
The unedited version is much better than you first go of editing. You just went to far.
The first picture is better, because everything is off balance from the girl pulling hair and contorted expression to the book to the color shift.
To me this is what senior pictures should be like, fun, unexpected, AS LONG AS the client goes for it.
Don't change a thing, show both versions your client/model, she can select. My bet is toward the altered version. The original is 'flat' compared to what you did after. VERY good job and I am picky.
This one goes with the welder pictures, memorable.
You should write some tutorial on you page profile, you are good at it.
JayT
Loc: Buffalo NY
Would I want it? No, but the only thing that matters is does she like it. If that's her personality, and she likes it, that is all that matters.
Here's a corny senior image, but she loved it. (That's her ring that sh's sitting on)
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