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Nov 22, 2011 22:36:50 #
Shot last night at Cal State long Beach music dept. The curves and colors caught my eye. There is a lot of noise, i was using my little elf sd750 camera set at1600 iso.
Nov 23, 2011 04:24:00 #
Personally, I think the composition is wonderful. I like how the railing leads into the photo and that the items of interest are not centered in the shot. You're right...the colors and lines are really nice.
Nov 23, 2011 11:33:25 #
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Nov 23, 2011 14:17:46 #
jaymi1028
Loc: Los Angeles
very cool shot! though I went to Cal State Long Beach, so I'm probably biased! :)
Nov 23, 2011 19:43:27 #
I like the repeating curves of railings, structure floor and bicycle wheel. I would look at cropping away all the lights and negative dark space at the top. Also, since our eyes are trained left to right the bannister leads the eye out of the frame. Try a horizontal flip too.
Nov 23, 2011 20:58:35 #
pfredd wrote:
Thanks for the suggestions, always welcome. I looked at it flipped and the bikes become the focal point. When I crop the top it looses the "sense of place".I like the repeating curves of railings, structure floor and bicycle wheel. I would look at cropping away all the lights and negative dark space at the top. Also, since our eyes are trained left to right the bannister leads the eye out of the frame. Try a horizontal flip too.
Perhaps if I get there again I will try many different angles with a better camera.
Nov 24, 2011 10:43:55 #
Nov 24, 2011 11:31:41 #
Love the picture but find the bikes a little distracting. The colors and curves make the picture wonderful.
Nov 24, 2011 11:50:03 #
it is amazing how many different views people can have. I like it. I like the curving of the rail and the straight up and down bars that hold it. I find my eyes forced to look at the bikes and the curves of the racks that hold them. A little busy...but I still like it.
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