thai on a bike
Nov 20, 2011 17:52:46 #
Nov 20, 2011 17:56:36 #
Well, what do YOU think is wrong with it? For starters, I'd probably crop it down to eliminate the blown sky in the upper right corner, and most of the rather uninteresting background to boot. To me, your focus here is on the pretty girl, not the rather bland architecture in the background. That building looks like any of the thousands of roadside rest stops along the American interstate system, so even if it's from Bangkok or somewhere interesting, it doesn't identify itself as such.
Nov 20, 2011 17:57:44 #
ok thanks,, actually the bldg is a tradtional thai house.. but i get your point,,
Nov 20, 2011 17:59:38 #
overexposed wrote:
I figured it might be, but like I said, it doesn't identify itself as such. It looks like a long, 1-story place with a tin roof, and there's a million of them along I-80. :thumbup:ok thanks,, actually the bldg is a tradtional thai house.. but i get your point,,
Nov 20, 2011 18:11:23 #
JimH wrote:
Well, what do YOU think is wrong with it? For starters, I'd probably crop it down to eliminate the blown sky in the upper right corner, and most of the rather uninteresting background to boot. To me, your focus here is on the pretty girl, not the rather bland architecture in the background. That building looks like any of the thousands of roadside rest stops along the American interstate system, so even if it's from Bangkok or somewhere interesting, it doesn't identify itself as such.
I agree. I probably would have shot this tighter. ( filled the frame with the girl and at wider fstop to blur the background
Nov 20, 2011 18:25:30 #
overexposed wrote:
any suggestions ,, my first picture i submit here
Here it is with the shadows bumped a bit (in Picassa) and a slight sharpening.
Nov 20, 2011 19:05:07 #
Nov 20, 2011 19:19:04 #
ok,, im getting the idea,,tried elements 9 also new to that,, but fun learning
Nov 20, 2011 19:27:30 #
ftpecktim
Loc: MONTANA
adjusted w/b camera raw..high pass filter 40%.....overlay mode....chopped and cropped in clouds
Nov 20, 2011 19:29:56 #
overexposed wrote:
ok,, im getting the idea,,tried elements 9 also new to that,, but fun learning
nice
Nov 20, 2011 19:31:44 #
Nov 20, 2011 19:45:25 #
overexposed wrote:
ok,, im getting the idea,,tried elements 9 also new to that,, but fun learning
I like this, it works in my opinion.
Nov 20, 2011 19:47:09 #
Cropped to bring out the subject, and corrected the levels.
This is just my opinion of how I would have handled this one.
This is just my opinion of how I would have handled this one.
Nov 20, 2011 19:59:40 #
its great to get this support,, i need to get out and make some more photos..
Nov 21, 2011 06:35:03 #
aaron
Loc: brooklyn ny
nice snapshot, but you must boost the contrast. it looks a bit flat,ie. not very black blacks and not very white whites.
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