Looking for Honest, Hard Hitting critique
Nov 20, 2011 11:02:48 #
All,
Saw this scene yesterday and went back and shot it this morning. Looking for very honest hard hitting criticism and everyone's opinion as to whether it's more effective in color or B&W.
Let me have it.
Saw this scene yesterday and went back and shot it this morning. Looking for very honest hard hitting criticism and everyone's opinion as to whether it's more effective in color or B&W.
Let me have it.
B&W Version
Color Version
Nov 20, 2011 11:05:44 #
leatherhelmets wrote:
All,
Saw this scene yesterday and went back and shot it this morning. Looking for very honest hard hitting criticism and everyone's opinion as to whether it's more effective in color or B&W.
Let me have it.
Saw this scene yesterday and went back and shot it this morning. Looking for very honest hard hitting criticism and everyone's opinion as to whether it's more effective in color or B&W.
Let me have it.
Boring aka not interesting
Nov 20, 2011 11:07:37 #
Pale,
Thanks. That's kind of where I was. It looked a lot better in person, but something is missing.
Thanks. That's kind of where I was. It looked a lot better in person, but something is missing.
Nov 20, 2011 11:08:54 #
The B&W is better,but still no subject. Would like to see what it would of looked like if you had knelt down or laid down
Nov 20, 2011 11:10:55 #
I knelt down as far as I could without loosing hte bottoms of the twin trees at the end of the path....any lower and they get cut off by the path.
Thanks for the comments.
Thanks for the comments.
Nov 20, 2011 11:21:23 #
Come on....there has to be more opinions out there...It a nice picture but not a good/great photo. Rule of Thirds has been used, Path leads you into the picture.....But where....to what...how do I bring a payoff to this image.
Nov 20, 2011 11:47:48 #
au2panner wrote:
The B&W is better,but still no subject. Would like to see what it would of looked like if you had knelt down or laid down
I disagree the subject is the journey to infinity at the end of the road. It is a thought picture.
Maybe color adjust #2 a little and adjus the contrast on #I.
Nov 20, 2011 12:50:29 #
I'm a nature girl at heart and I very much like your color photo. There's peace, serenity and warmth in the shot and if I was there, I'd have sat right down in the sun and enjoyed my surroundings....after taking a photo, of course. :thumbup:
Nov 20, 2011 14:16:07 #
Looks like a pair of doctoctors here but I go for the...
,... the ... .<><><><>B/W<><><>??? I guessed it!Bravo Bv
,... the ... .<><><><>B/W<><><>??? I guessed it!Bravo Bv
Nov 20, 2011 14:20:05 #
hey there high there ho ho ho there, who said it was a bore?
not so as the subject was well framed and at the moment the
thing to do, so what is a photo but a moment of your time
on planet Earth and a moment of time nobody knows but ye.
not so as the subject was well framed and at the moment the
thing to do, so what is a photo but a moment of your time
on planet Earth and a moment of time nobody knows but ye.
Nov 20, 2011 14:21:28 #
Nov 20, 2011 14:22:56 #
crop out the empty space above, just a bit too
and the bottom too ... humm ... that's all I got
and the bottom too ... humm ... that's all I got
Nov 20, 2011 14:29:55 #
I think there is an opportunity for a picture here. Rather than stand right in the middle of the road and shoot straight down it, try moving over the side by the fence line and try to find a fence post with some character, and put it along one side of the frame.
Something like this, although my shot is not that great. My photo is of an empty field where my Great-Great Grandfather homesteaded in Oregon. I wanted a picture of the land, and just put the fencepost in there as otherwise it would be a totally boring picture. (Probably still is to anybody but me)!
Something like this, although my shot is not that great. My photo is of an empty field where my Great-Great Grandfather homesteaded in Oregon. I wanted a picture of the land, and just put the fencepost in there as otherwise it would be a totally boring picture. (Probably still is to anybody but me)!
Nov 20, 2011 14:33:44 #
Nov 20, 2011 14:37:01 #
PalePictures wrote:
Boring aka not interesting
I like the B&W. Can't 'splain why.leatherhelmets wrote:
All,
Saw this scene yesterday and went back and shot it this morning. Looking for very honest hard hitting criticism and everyone's opinion as to whether it's more effective in color or B&W.
Let me have it.
Saw this scene yesterday and went back and shot it this morning. Looking for very honest hard hitting criticism and everyone's opinion as to whether it's more effective in color or B&W.
Let me have it.
Boring aka not interesting
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