CHG_CANON wrote:
The pose and exposure are very nice. You could clean up the background a bit as noted above. Great eye contact with the camera.
But, what concerns me is the image is not in sharp focus, not her eye nor anywhere that I could find. Your camera and this lens are much more capable. Look at your original file in DPP and confirm where you focused and your focus mode.
Here is a cropped Photo. The focus was square on the face in auto mode. Please suggest anything else you can think of regarding focus. More comments are welcome.