RichinSeattle wrote:
I like it a lot! You got lucky with her charming expression, which accounts for most of the pleasure in seeing this portrait. You might try cropping it a bit. to center her head. There's a little too much darkness above her and to the left. Otherwise, just count your blessings.
I like the slightly off center and drama of the black background. I wouldn't alter anything. Lovely portrait of a beautiful girl.