Over the Door
Dec 24, 2018 13:29:39 #
Chicflat
Loc: Tulsa, Ok,
This question may be a matter of aesthetics and so will necessarily be subjective. Fine; feel free to comment, and I know it is all what we choose to frame and process any image as we wish. That said, my question concerns all the inclusion above the door. My feeling is that the windows and structure holds the vision of the viewer downward thereby directing the line of sight through the door to the grounds. So, is the framing of the shot wrong for you. And does this approach compositionally and aesthetically defective?
Dec 24, 2018 13:33:42 #
Dec 24, 2018 13:45:00 #
Normally I wouldn't recommend completely correcting convergence, but with so many parallel vertical lines near the edge of the frame I get the impression that it would look better with the perspective distortion corrected so that the verticals are parallel with the edges of the frame. The stuff up above is added interest without being too much of a distraction.
Dec 24, 2018 15:14:43 #
Harry0
Loc: Gardena, Cal
I like it.
The line and angles contrast nicely with the curves of the plants.
Just the door looks kinda interesting, kinda boring.
If'n you wanna PP the thing, enhance the green and remove the car.
The line and angles contrast nicely with the curves of the plants.
Just the door looks kinda interesting, kinda boring.
If'n you wanna PP the thing, enhance the green and remove the car.
Dec 24, 2018 17:00:12 #
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Dec 24, 2018 19:07:24 #
Chicflat
Loc: Tulsa, Ok,
Thanks. I had thought about the perspective, but I was afraid my skill level would be lacking.
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Dec 25, 2018 07:05:58 #
AirWalter
Loc: Tipp City, Ohio
Chicflat wrote:
This question may be a matter of aesthetics and so... (show quote)
You were standing to the right of the center of the image, and the image is not centered. I can't get past that.
Dec 25, 2018 07:27:23 #
I would crop the top of the photo. The electric conduit detracts and the additional roof adds nothing. Then I think you would have a pretty decent picture..
Dec 25, 2018 07:40:27 #
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