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Aug 28, 2021 11:32:39   #
sippyjug104 Loc: Missouri
 
I prefer what's behind door Number Two.

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Aug 28, 2021 12:12:04   #
peterjoseph
 
Thank you

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Aug 28, 2021 12:23:19   #
Earnest Botello Loc: Hockley, Texas
 
#2 for me, Peter.

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Aug 28, 2021 12:23:50   #
willaim Loc: Sunny Southern California
 
The second one. The distracting background is eliminated as you are interested in the beetle.

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Aug 28, 2021 13:09:34   #
John from gpwmi Loc: Michigan
 
#2 Better composition and the subject matter is obvious.

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Aug 28, 2021 13:14:07   #
Rathyatra Loc: Southport, United Kingdom
 
Second photo.

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Aug 28, 2021 13:45:30   #
frankraney Loc: Clovis, Ca.
 
peterjoseph wrote:
I took a photo of this beetle with a water background. One is more close-up. Which one is a better composition. Please comment,thanks


The second one.

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Aug 28, 2021 14:32:20   #
Horseart Loc: Alabama
 
#2

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Aug 28, 2021 14:46:24   #
tcthome Loc: NJ
 
jeweler53 wrote:
The second one.



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Aug 28, 2021 14:48:57   #
Abo
 
CO wrote:
Using the rule of thirds would be good. The beetle is too centered in the frame. Here is a photo that shows the rule of thirds. Try cropping some off the left side of the first photo and a little off the bottom.


Exactly!

CO is right Peter... rule of thirds is perfect for your otherwise strong images.

The horizon is low on the left of both images... needs correcting too.

Also I notice a lot of grain. Did you add "film grain" in post or
is that some other artifact?

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Aug 28, 2021 14:49:50   #
cambriaman Loc: Central CA Coast
 
I have never used the rule of thirds as a precise requirement. I have fortunately always had "an eye for composition" which for me works better than strictly interpreted rules. Just sayin'

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Aug 28, 2021 15:10:00   #
Abo
 
cambriaman wrote:
I have never used the rule of thirds as a precise requirement. I have fortunately always had "an eye for composition" which for me works better than strictly interpreted rules. Just sayin'


I agree mate, "rules are made to be broken"; but there is a time and place,
the rule of thirds though, is made for this image...
or this image is made for the rule of thirds:


(Download)

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Aug 28, 2021 15:22:58   #
Dan' de Bourgogne
 
peterjoseph wrote:
I took a photo of this beetle with a water background. One is more close-up. Which one is a better composition. Please comment,thanks


Yes...N°2 is top notch!

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Aug 28, 2021 17:41:57   #
vicksart Loc: Novato, CA -earthquake country
 
Hands down, the second.

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Aug 28, 2021 17:55:30   #
JOHN LULLO
 
Peter: I prefer the second photo. In the first photo the hanging bulb distracts from the main subject. The second
photo brings your eye right to the subject. Otherwise you did a great job?

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