Bill Hancock wrote:
I like the night shot. There are several things that are wrong, and like was suggested, an early morning or late evening shot would be better; however there are some adjustment that could be made. I would not throw the shot out completely. Play around with it and see if you can come close to what "you" actually saw. I hope you don't mind but I played a little with it in Photoshop and made some improvements. I am an amateur, but I don't let that stop me from trying to do better.
I like the night shot a lot. I wouldn't change a thing. Whether purposeful or by chance, it has the authentic look of a photo from a vintage postcard like the sample here. Works for me.