Please critique the attached photo.
Apr 25, 2018 08:29:07 #
Keeper for sure.
I like the realisum.
I think you should do another version and overcook it to see what you can do with it.
I think this one has more in it.
Fix the horizon, go 16x9, reframe slightly and just add a little more pop. Either the water or the funnel cloud could use some more exageration.
Do a few more versions print a test and consider this a candidate for metal.
Nice work.
I like the realisum.
I think you should do another version and overcook it to see what you can do with it.
I think this one has more in it.
Fix the horizon, go 16x9, reframe slightly and just add a little more pop. Either the water or the funnel cloud could use some more exageration.
Do a few more versions print a test and consider this a candidate for metal.
Nice work.
Apr 25, 2018 08:35:39 #
Apr 25, 2018 08:40:50 #
Apr 25, 2018 08:44:19 #
Print and hang it as is.....beautiful.Have You looked into metallic paper,it makes seascapes like this one pop.
Apr 25, 2018 08:47:34 #
tpelczy wrote:
cropped, straightened and made a little dramatic. a beautiful photo to start with.
I have to say, the additional bottom and right hand cropping you did, in addition to the leveling have made this shot stronger. My viewing is able to much more enjoy the storm and boat. The dark upper right and lower right are distractions.
Apr 25, 2018 08:57:42 #
tpelczy wrote:
cropped, straightened and made a little dramatic. a beautiful photo to start with.
Beautiful!
Apr 25, 2018 09:14:44 #
Apr 25, 2018 09:39:19 #
Apr 25, 2018 09:45:53 #
Fish Bones wrote:
I am processing the photo to display in my home any constructive criticism will be appreciated. If anyone has any experience having photos printed on Metal or Glass, please let me know your thoughts and where it was done. Thanks in advance for your help
Allen
Allen
I'll bet this would look good in Black & White.
Apr 25, 2018 09:49:44 #
That's a pretty damn nice image. My only thought is to maybe add some saturation to bring out the gold in the sun light in the sky and off the water. Other wise, I stay with what you've got.
Apr 25, 2018 09:56:46 #
Great photo. I would decide whether i wanted the sky or water my priority and crop up or down accordingly. My preference would be to loose about 1/3 of the water at the bottom. It will look great, framed and hung.
Apr 25, 2018 09:57:13 #
Apr 25, 2018 10:00:05 #
This is one suggestion... the dark clouds on the right may not print like you want, especially when you blow the photo up to a larger size to hang on the wall.
Decide on what's important in the photo... I'm assuming boat, birds, and some sky affect. If so crop the photo--keep left portion and cut out the portion of dark sky which is distracting.
Good Luck
Decide on what's important in the photo... I'm assuming boat, birds, and some sky affect. If so crop the photo--keep left portion and cut out the portion of dark sky which is distracting.
Good Luck
Apr 25, 2018 10:04:42 #
repleo wrote:
Great image. Well done. Looks excellent on download. Definitely do NOT remove the boat.
I tried hard to think of a suggestion. The best I could come up was to try a 16:9 format and remove some of the sea foreground.
I tried hard to think of a suggestion. The best I could come up was to try a 16:9 format and remove some of the sea foreground.
Yes, I’d remove about 1/3 of the sea. Beautiful shot!
Apr 25, 2018 10:07:56 #
Fish Bones wrote:
I am processing the photo to display in my home any constructive criticism will be appreciated. If anyone has any experience having photos printed on Metal or Glass, please let me know your thoughts and where it was done. Thanks in advance for your help
Allen
Allen
It's an excellent photo.
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