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My WPC 1541 - Beer* Entry revision 2
Oct 31, 2015 14:39:20   #
BeaverNewby Loc: Memphis, Tn
 
Hi Guys

This is a revision 2 of my entry for the WPC 1541 - Beer* contest. Which can be found here:

http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest.jsp?pcnum=191

Original Critique: http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-344021-1.html

Revision 1 can be found here:
http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-344352-1.html

This is the reshoot, trying some of the ideas suggested from the original critique.

Please Critique!!

A nice cold brew to celebrate changing the water pump on my car. No leaks, No leftover nuts and bolts, Just a busted knuckle or two. With the money I saved I can afford a new lens. A Premium Imported Polish light beer, yummy!!
A nice cold brew to celebrate changing the water p...
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Nov 1, 2015 09:36:52   #
davefales Loc: Virginia
 
I like what you did to the blown out highlights but think you should have kept your original composition with the bottle to the right.

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Nov 4, 2015 02:46:39   #
BeaverNewby Loc: Memphis, Tn
 
davefales wrote:
I like what you did to the blown out highlights but think you should have kept your original composition with the bottle to the right.


Hi davefales
Thanks for the Comments. I wanted to try to use the wrenches as leading lines, but it looked kind of off to me also. I can move the bottle to the right but then I would cut off the wrench handles. Decisions, Decisions.

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