BeaverNewby Loc: Memphis, Tn

Hi Guys

This is a revision of my entry for the WPC 1541 - Beer* contest. Which can be found here:

http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest.jsp?pcnum=191

Original Critique: http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-344021-1.html

I plan to reshoot, but after the ideas suggested from the critique I took another look and made some slight adjustments to the original Raw file.

1. Exposure was reduced.*
2. Bottle was straightened slightly.
3. Crop adjusted slightly.
4. Little White Bug Masked off the Bottle neck.

Detail in the Bottle Label is substantially improved.

I think its much better?

A nice cold brew to celebrate changing the water pump on my car. No leaks, No leftover nuts and bolts, Just a busted knuckle or two. With the money I saved I can afford a new lens. A Premium Imported Polish light beer, yummy!!

(Download)

pfrancke Loc: cold Maine

I like the changes you have made. The eye lands on the bottle and wants to stay there as it should. I like how the beer now gets the attention. The only regret -- not being able to drink it after the successful work.

BeaverNewby Loc: Memphis, Tn

Thanks pFrancke

I glad you like it.

The reshoot is now ready! Stay tuned.