PhotoDerek wrote:
... could it be improved?
Yes. The image, taken on a cloudy dreary day, is rather flat and overly bright for the conditions. The subject is the cliffs and they're lacking detail, contrast and depth. There are details and colors in the sky that can also be recovered.
PhotoDerek wrote:
Any comments...?
Attached is an example of correcting the issues I describe above. Here are the basic steps.
1) Global Adjustments: Decreasing highlights, increasing whites, decreasing blacks and adding a little texture. This brings out sky detail, more detail in the cliff face, reduces brightness without changing exposure and increases overal scene contrast.
2) Removed Halo: This is a very minor correction but a pet peeve of mine. Edge halos, such as across the hill/sky boundary, just show a lack of attention to detail. If your posting to social media, then it's not really obvoius, but if you plan to print, the halos become more obvious the larger the print.
3) increase cliff detail: Recover a little more cliff face detail since this is the subject of the image. I used Aurora HDR to make tonal adjustments the layer image and then reduced layer opacity until I was satisfied with the result (~30%). This could also be done by other means such as increasing clarity or using curves.
4) Curves: Made adjustments to the cliff face using a series of curves (3) and luminosity masks to further bring out contrast detail in the cliff face. These were local adjustments to the cliff face only.
5) Dodge and Burn: Apply D&B to bring out depth in the cliff face.
6) Fix sky hotspot: There was a small area in the sky that was clipped at some point in the process, so cloning in areas from other parts of the sky, repaired the clipped sky highlights.
The attached histograms show how the original image (as posted) was right shifted decreasing contrast. This gives the image a soft hazy look since the blacks have been suppressed. The second histogram shows how the image uses a greater tonal range, increasing overall image contrast and left shifting (reducing) the tone curve resulting in a lower image brightness.
If you plan to further edit this image, I hope this gives you some constructive ideas to help you along the way.
Mike