TimS wrote:
O.K., there is something wrong with this photo but I can't quite put my finger on it. Is it the colors in the background - do I need to warm them up? I thought having the warmer tones of my kids against the cool tones of the beach would be nice but its just not doing it for me.
What do you think? What would you do to make this better?
(This is a reduced quality version of the original.)
Thanks in advance!
I'll be Bold,sorry
What is wrong.(IMO)
This set up fits more to studio portrait where you take advantage of lights and shades.
I don't see any shades, must be high noon,for portrait bad.
For snapshot too stationary. If you want memory shot,find pleasant place.
Positioning in this picture i call it STS(Stop,Turn,Smile) boys are nice and it look like they can act normally as with small kids it is more difficult.
Make them act more natural, not this artificial smiles, i mean let one sit, other kneel,say something funny, and don't let them look straight into camera lens.
Horizon Level and oldest boy head is distracting,background too bright and sharp sun isn't really pleasant on their faces.
I photograph family or anything else almost like I'm paid for it.
My wife told me once "treat me rather like stranger". So I did, it is more polite and i love it,same with photo taking. Best family pictures are candid ones i believe, from some distance when kids are not aware of camera and they behave normal.
Again this is just my opinion.