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Nov 8, 2013 17:30:30   #
buckwheat wrote:
I didn't mean to sound so blunt. Using this as a background layer for anything else from other flowers, to frogs or your cousin, would give the photo a purpose. Early on it was drummed into me that every photo must have a purpose (tell a story) and have something that your eye will focus and come to rest on as it cruises through the picture. Having said that, I have seen lots of "art" prints that violate that rule. I have several folders of shots that I took specifically for backgrounds. I collect sky and cloud shots mostly, as here in Arizona we are cursed with clear skies most of the year.
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LOL i would LOVE to have that curse :) yes i see what you and bmac are saying its nice just no story to it unless something is added to it. Now i just have to learn HOW to do that lol back to you tube and google i go. :)
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Nov 8, 2013 16:48:43   #
Bmac wrote:
The main problem is, used as a stand alone photograph, it has no discernible focal point to maintain interest, in my opinion.

THE IMPORTANCE OF A FOCAL POINT IN PHOTO COMPOSITIONS
http://www.picturecorrect.com/tips/focal-point-in-photo-compositions/


yes i understood what you meant but i just can't bring myself to throw it out I know its not one of those oh wow amazing shots but there is just something about it that makes me want to work with it and see what i discover. thank you for looking and trying to help.
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Nov 8, 2013 16:44:27   #
jteee wrote:
I like the patterns in the photo, and thought they may be better displayed as a BW. I'm not great at this but this is what I came up with.


OH wow Thank you for this suggestion yes it does bring out the patterns well.
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Nov 8, 2013 16:43:45   #
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
Here you go:
First of all, let me stress that this is just one of thousands of possible interpretations of this photo. This is just one treatment I happen to enjoy.
I am using Photoshop Elements 11.
First, I cropped it slightly to eliminate some of the background which I knew would not convert well with the effects I wanted to use.
I Then hit the brightness/contrast auto correct box which brightened it a little.
Then I used the "add saturated slide film effect" to bring out the muted colors a bit more.
Next, I went up the filters drop down menu and chose "comic." There are many sliders available here so you can adjust the number of colors, the width of edge lines, the smoothness, and so on and so forth. You can experiment with those until you like the way your image looks in the preview box. Then click "done."
As a final step, I applied a 50% black vignette. This covered up the remaining bit of background and added an appearance of depth and dimension.

I repeat, there are a lot of things you could do to enhance this kind of image. Get in there and start learning your programs, you will love it. There are plenty of YouTube training videos online. Learn one or two features at a time and pretty soon you'll be making all your images look their best.
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Thank you so much I do like this effect and will try it out I really like how it shows the lines on the one flower i will definitely be playing around with this thank you again.
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Nov 8, 2013 15:05:06   #
hmm thats weird i did save as a jpeg one moment i will try again I would love to learn how to do more with this photo with pp I love your onions picture but have no idea how you accomplished that :)

Is this better?

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Nov 8, 2013 14:51:26   #
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
You can massage an image like this to give it a lot more interest and pop. I was going to download it and show an example of what I mean to you, but it didn't want to download as a .jpg file. This photo is definitely not junk. There are several directions you could take this in post processing to make it more interesting, or make it a good pattern shot. What kind of software do you have and what are the kinds of changes you know how to do?


I know very very VERY little about pp I'm able to clone stuff out and use the healing brush on small areas and I just learned about turning a color photo into a grayscale one. I have lightroom and adobe photoshop. I wonder why it won't let you download i checked store original...
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Nov 8, 2013 14:48:49   #
buckwheat wrote:
It's not junk, but to me it has no center of interest. It could serve really well as a background for another image.


Could you explain what you mean please? Are talking about ...i think its called layers in pp? Should I not have gotten as close maybe? I couldn't move in closer as I don't have a macro lens. Thank you for looking and commenting.
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Nov 8, 2013 14:43:31   #
If i force myself I can keep my eyes where they are supposed to be however the legs in the background keep distracting me. Maybe move the crop over to the pillar that way all the focus is on the emotion you wanted to capture. I'm new so i could be wrong but I think that would help. Beautiful doggie, nice catch. :)
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Nov 8, 2013 14:26:57   #
I'm not quite sure I just have this feeling it needs something or i should have done something different to it to make it really nice. Any ideas or suggestions or is it just junk?


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Nov 8, 2013 13:59:35   #
Wow thats is really neat! I know nothing about birds but maybe he has an accordion like neck bone structure. Just spit ballin though i really have no clue. Do you know the name of the bird now i'm curious? See what you have done you have made me wanna go learn something! :P :D
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Nov 8, 2013 10:15:21   #
Mogul wrote:
In your eyes, in your mind and in your heart, these are the most precious practice subjects in the world. If that is a snapshot, so be it. You will keep trying and slowly your snapshorts will become works of art. What are the three most important an artist possesses. Read my first sentence again. I have no more skills or advice I can impart to you, except to remind tou that your best tools are your eyes, mind and heart. And you are lucky to be able to practice while doing the most important job you will ever have. Keep trying and good luck!
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Thank you Mogul this comment was very sweet and touched my heart. Your right I am very fortunate to have 3 wonderful yet very busy subjects to practice on. Thank you for looking and commenting.
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Nov 8, 2013 10:11:32   #
Chuck_893 wrote:
I think that's pretty darn good. Others have mentioned that showing more of the trike would be good. I would recommend pulling back until you can show the whole trike. I think a panning shot with churning wheels is terrific looking. The slower you dare take the shutter the faster the thing looks. I notice you popped a flash on him. That will tend to give you a single sharp image overlying the softer ones underneath. I'd recommend trying to learn the trick without flash, which requires quite a number of bad pix to get a single good one.

If I'm telling you something you already know I apologize, but the single most important trick in panning is follow through, just like golf. Your focus point needs to be where your subject will be when you fire your shutter, but you need to track and follow through. If you stop panning the camera at the instant you fire you'll get a smear every time. Say your son is coming from your left as in the example. You already have your framing roughed in to get him and the whole trike, plus a little for cropping. You may be on your knees (ow) but you pivot from the waist to pick him up in your finder as he pedals furiously to cross in front of you. You keep tracking him until he's just a fraction ahead of where you expect to get the picture, at which point you squeeze it off and the image blacks out. Here's where you have to just keep smoothly pivoting from the waist to your right as if you were panning a movie camera! That's the trick. If when your finder image returns you discover that you are still tracking him, that's success! The camera fires at, say, 1/30 of a second, and it's still tracking—smoothly we hope—as your subject rockets past, so you get parts of him sharp, and others smeared, which is what gives the illusion. The spokes of the wheels are smeared. Feet and churning legs are smeared. There may even be some after-image smeared across the hedge. But ideally his face and eyes are relatively sharp, and you've got it! It takes, oh, 10 or 20 tries at first to get the technique down, and he'll tire and quit (or you'll tire and quit) but the results can be just marvelous. :thumbup:
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I think i need golf lessons so i can take good pictures :lol: Your picture is amazing! Its to cold in my area for me to practice this for right now so i will have to put this project on hold until it warms up... (my kids and I are big babies once it drops below 50 we turn tail and hide :) ) Thank you very much for your suggestions i will definitely try and implement them and thank you for the encouragement i will not give up :)
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Nov 8, 2013 10:05:55   #
I am truly intrigued by this topic I went out this morning and quickly snapped this picture so I could see if i was actually learning anything. I really hope I am I am trying to read, research and put into practice. Is this a better photo with negative space? The relationship between the Lilac tree buds leaves and sky making your eye see the intricate design in the leaves. I personally think this would be a very boring picture if it weren't for the intricate design in the leaves. What are your thought?


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Nov 7, 2013 20:29:05   #
Linda From Maine wrote:
No worries, just remember it's such a subjective topic, and I am no expert :) The background of this mushroom does not compete for attention IMHO. It is a pleasing color, mostly smooth texture (barely bokeh), and seems appropriate to the setting.

I think bokeh consisting of bright spots draws your eye away from the subject. I find myself wanting to know what the source of those bright spots are rather than spending more time with the flower. Also it just occurred to me that your flower is cropped quite close. Maybe if it took up less space in the frame?
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hmm thank you very much I think im getting a better understanding and will try what you suggested :) Hangman I love your picture thank you for posting it.
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Nov 7, 2013 20:23:09   #
pastagal wrote:
I think it is a great shot! It's stuff like this...the look in her eyes..the smile on his face... It's just a moment in time which you captured nicely!


thank you very much for looking and your kind words.
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