InfiniteISO wrote:
Pretty good, I think. I like models that don't meet the normal stereotypes, I think they make excellent subjects. I like the coordination of the make-up with the background color.
It's probably a trick of the computer, but to me, her face looks soft in the first two images. In the downloads, however, her face is in sharp focus. Personally, I would alter this entire set by pulling down clarity. I don't think many models of any age would appreciate the sharpness of these. She would photograph better completely nude wrapped in something sheer.
If you had to do it all over again, and maybe you do, I'd ditch the jewelry. Tell her she doesn't need anything else competing for our attention. I'd also photoshop the bottom of that shoe and the few stray dark spots on your background.
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Pretty good, I think. I like models that don't me... (
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