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Jul 7, 2012 09:32:52 #
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Jul 7, 2012 10:28:53 #
Great portrait in that it reveals personality in the expression, especially in the eyes. Good exposure and proper focus so as to produce that appealing demure look of a pretty girl with a fine complexion.
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Jul 7, 2012 10:57:53 #
Not a fan of the eyes being that far to her right. I would prefer to see some white around her iris.
Jul 7, 2012 11:04:31 #
Wonderful photo of a beautiful young woman!!
Would be a super poster to have hanging on the wall in a very large size!! Very relaxing and pleasant to look at!!
Would be a super poster to have hanging on the wall in a very large size!! Very relaxing and pleasant to look at!!
Jul 7, 2012 11:05:25 #
I just read some of the earlier posts. Not that this young lady has one, but if a person has a lazy eye there are ways to pose them so it's not noticeable. My wife has a lazy eye and I just need to be aware of that when I take her picture.
Jul 7, 2012 11:10:06 #
The girl is very pretty and over all it is a nice photo. I think the color behind her left ear is distracting and I would like her eyes to be a little left to show the whites of her eyes. Very nice.
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Jul 7, 2012 11:13:41 #
Definitely has beautiful facial features. Just be careful when having her turn her head so far. It can make her neck look far shorter than it is.
Jul 7, 2012 11:14:05 #
Paul B.
Loc: North Carolina
Really like the picture and personally dont see anything wrong with it.looks very good to me.
Jul 7, 2012 11:38:15 #
tainkc wrote:
quote=Horseart Fantastic! Don't think I don't kno... (show quote)
My only nit pick, and I would never have said anything but... you said you carefully chose the background? the two people standing in the back are distracting to the composition of the shot. I like the overall feeling of the shot, just not the background. I like her eyes, maybe an idea for your next session, using just her eyes to tell the story.
Jul 7, 2012 11:48:48 #
bullwinkle wrote:
I am glad you caught that one! Yep, she was one wet noodle. Lol.I like the picture she makes a pretty model - the crop isolates her face and stands on her beauty alone. As for the crop being so tight, did people miss that it was a humid 100 degree day? I figured she was cropped partially so all the sweat didn't show.
Jul 7, 2012 11:57:12 #
hlmichel wrote:
Interesting. I read some where that just like a bird in flight, that you should leave just a little more open in the direction that the person is looking or going. As for the lighting, I thought I was spot on. Perhaps I wasn't. This is exactly why I asked for comments. In other words, Thanks very much for your input.There is always going to be disagreement about cutting off the top of someone's head. I like it, others do not.
In my opinion, if you are going crop off the top and bottom, you should fill the shot with her face.
I'd also like to see more light in her face.
In my opinion, if you are going crop off the top and bottom, you should fill the shot with her face.
I'd also like to see more light in her face.
Jul 7, 2012 11:58:10 #
amyvan171 wrote:
I think you are absolutely correct. I over did the turn. It is obvious in the original.Definitely has beautiful facial features. Just be careful when having her turn her head so far. It can make her neck look far shorter than it is.
Jul 7, 2012 11:59:49 #
allen finley photography wrote:
How on earth did you notice that? Lol. She was over 20 ft. away from the nearest background feature and with the blur of the background, I really did not think It mattered. quote=tainkc quote=Horseart Fantastic! Don't thi... (show quote)
Jul 7, 2012 12:02:08 #
dawgtired wrote:
I think you are right. I think I had her look just a little to far to her right. And no, she doesn't have anything wrong with her eyes. I just mad the turn a hair too tight. Thanks for your input.Not a fan of the eyes being that far to her right. I would prefer to see some white around her iris.
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