Beautiful......really like the last one.
Start, malarkey, first post I will believe that, but you have the eye of experience, you do very well indeed. #1 and#3 great composition, but need some cropping [I am a crop evangelist]. #2 the photo is the driftwood, the mtns are just backdrop ... so if you can go back to the area shoot more of that tree.
[Linda from Maine page 2...same bother about the tree]
#1, crop left up to the leaning tree and crop bottom to get rid of the little dam at the bottom and crop right to get rid of that scruff of grass in fore ground. With that your well composed photo is uncluttered. The viewer will not wonder what is beyond the scruff or what happens to the stream after the little water fall ... poof.... gone.
#3, The message is sun, trees and path.. isolation.... ooops isolation!! what do I see, a house, snow covered boat, and a car... they have nothing to do with the theme of the photo... the freeze to death story.
Again, you have two of the three that are good, but not quite great... little trim work and they are award winners in the Camera Club. If you have not been at photography long.... well gee... you have "the eye." OK, OK your a pro landscape guy and this is your "first post."
See the following free book on composition, long read so just nibble at it:
http://truecenterpublishing.com/photopsy/article_index.htm
Why learn Lighroom...big learning curve.... keep your life simple... if your going to learn, then learn a new program like Affinity. Spend your $ on Topaz plugins.
Very nice series...love the 2nd and 3rd shots. Nice job.
Stash
Loc: South Central Massachusetts
Pretty darn good first dive, Cindy. Very nice.
Particularly like Nr 2 - a great shot!
Nicely done! Welcome to the forum!
dpullum wrote:
Start, malarkey, first post I will believe that, but you have the eye of experience, you do very well indeed. #1 and#3 great composition, but need some cropping [I am a crop evangelist]. #2 the photo is the driftwood, the mtns are just backdrop ... so if you can go back to the area shoot more of that tree.
[Linda from Maine page 2...same bother about the tree]
#1, crop left up to the leaning tree and crop bottom to get rid of the little dam at the bottom and crop right to get rid of that scruff of grass in fore ground. With that your well composed photo is uncluttered. The viewer will not wonder what is beyond the scruff or what happens to the stream after the little water fall ... poof.... gone.
#3, The message is sun, trees and path.. isolation.... ooops isolation!! what do I see, a house, snow covered boat, and a car... they have nothing to do with the theme of the photo... the freeze to death story.
Again, you have two of the three that are good, but not quite great... little trim work and they are award winners in the Camera Club. If you have not been at photography long.... well gee... you have "the eye." OK, OK your a pro landscape guy and this is your "first post."
See the following free book on composition, long read so just nibble at it:
http://truecenterpublishing.com/photopsy/article_index.htm b Start, malarkey, first post I will believe that... (
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Thanks for the compliments and the critique! I printed this out so that I can play with the suggestions, and honest....I have only had the small point and shoot camera's..this is my first dslr. I am deleting wayyyyy more pictures than I am keeping! lol I will check out the book as well.
All three well composed, nicely done for your first posts looking forward to more!
Very nice images for your first post. Enjoy UHH. Very nice folks that are so willing to share their expertise. My brother lives in C. Falls
CindyHouk wrote:
Ok here it goes....I am diving in. Here are a couple of pics from my Nikon D5300, remember it's my first dslr and just got it in Nov...so still learning. All comments welcome.
1. Taken while out snowmobiling
2. Taken while on a hike in Glacier National Park - Fish Creek Drainage at Lake McDonald
3. My driveway on a cold winter night
I am also learning Lightroom - so any post editing suggestions welcome!
Very nice and your shots don't look like they are coming from a "newbie" keep posting.
CPR
Loc: Nature Coast of Florida
Well done. Makes me want to go there..
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