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Apr 26, 2017 06:22:03   #
photophly Loc: Old Bridge NJ
 
Beautiful......really like the last one.

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Apr 26, 2017 06:25:19   #
rlaugh Loc: Michigan & Florida
 
Good work!

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Apr 26, 2017 07:21:50   #
dpullum Loc: Tampa Florida
 
Start, malarkey, first post I will believe that, but you have the eye of experience, you do very well indeed.

#1 and#3 great composition, but need some cropping [I am a crop evangelist]. #2 the photo is the driftwood, the mtns are just backdrop ... so if you can go back to the area shoot more of that tree.
[Linda from Maine page 2...same bother about the tree]

#1, crop left up to the leaning tree and crop bottom to get rid of the little dam at the bottom and crop right to get rid of that scruff of grass in fore ground. With that your well composed photo is uncluttered. The viewer will not wonder what is beyond the scruff or what happens to the stream after the little water fall ... poof.... gone.

#3, The message is sun, trees and path.. isolation.... ooops isolation!! what do I see, a house, snow covered boat, and a car... they have nothing to do with the theme of the photo... the freeze to death story.

Again, you have two of the three that are good, but not quite great... little trim work and they are award winners in the Camera Club. If you have not been at photography long.... well gee... you have "the eye." OK, OK your a pro landscape guy and this is your "first post."

See the following free book on composition, long read so just nibble at it:
http://truecenterpublishing.com/photopsy/article_index.htm

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Apr 26, 2017 07:22:38   #
dpullum Loc: Tampa Florida
 
Why learn Lighroom...big learning curve.... keep your life simple... if your going to learn, then learn a new program like Affinity. Spend your $ on Topaz plugins.

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Apr 26, 2017 07:33:40   #
fourg1b2006 Loc: Long Island New York
 
Very nice series...love the 2nd and 3rd shots. Nice job.

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Apr 26, 2017 07:52:53   #
Two Feathers
 
CindyHouk wrote:
Ok here it goes....I am diving in. Here are a couple of pics from my Nikon D5300, remember it's my first dslr and just got it in Nov...so still learning. All comments welcome.
1. Taken while out snowmobiling
2. Taken while on a hike in Glacier National Park - Fish Creek Drainage at Lake McDonald
3. My driveway on a cold winter night

I am also learning Lightroom - so any post editing suggestions welcome!



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Apr 26, 2017 07:54:56   #
Stash Loc: South Central Massachusetts
 
Pretty darn good first dive, Cindy. Very nice.

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Apr 26, 2017 07:57:45   #
Rineal Loc: Copake NY
 
Particularly like Nr 2 - a great shot!

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Apr 26, 2017 08:19:03   #
Treepusher Loc: Kingston, Massachusetts
 
Nicely done! Welcome to the forum!

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Apr 26, 2017 08:44:10   #
CindyHouk Loc: Nw MT
 
dpullum wrote:
Start, malarkey, first post I will believe that, but you have the eye of experience, you do very well indeed.

#1 and#3 great composition, but need some cropping [I am a crop evangelist]. #2 the photo is the driftwood, the mtns are just backdrop ... so if you can go back to the area shoot more of that tree.
[Linda from Maine page 2...same bother about the tree]

#1, crop left up to the leaning tree and crop bottom to get rid of the little dam at the bottom and crop right to get rid of that scruff of grass in fore ground. With that your well composed photo is uncluttered. The viewer will not wonder what is beyond the scruff or what happens to the stream after the little water fall ... poof.... gone.

#3, The message is sun, trees and path.. isolation.... ooops isolation!! what do I see, a house, snow covered boat, and a car... they have nothing to do with the theme of the photo... the freeze to death story.

Again, you have two of the three that are good, but not quite great... little trim work and they are award winners in the Camera Club. If you have not been at photography long.... well gee... you have "the eye." OK, OK your a pro landscape guy and this is your "first post."

See the following free book on composition, long read so just nibble at it:
http://truecenterpublishing.com/photopsy/article_index.htm
b Start, malarkey, first post I will believe that... (show quote)


Thanks for the compliments and the critique! I printed this out so that I can play with the suggestions, and honest....I have only had the small point and shoot camera's..this is my first dslr. I am deleting wayyyyy more pictures than I am keeping! lol I will check out the book as well.

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Apr 26, 2017 08:48:35   #
phlash46 Loc: Westchester County, New York
 
You are doing just fine.

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Apr 26, 2017 10:36:22   #
Bushpilot Loc: Minnesota
 
All three well composed, nicely done for your first posts looking forward to more!

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Apr 26, 2017 11:17:30   #
MT native Loc: Big Sky Country — Montana
 
Very nice images for your first post. Enjoy UHH. Very nice folks that are so willing to share their expertise. My brother lives in C. Falls

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Apr 26, 2017 11:30:28   #
Mrsmoses Loc: Oregon
 
CindyHouk wrote:
Ok here it goes....I am diving in. Here are a couple of pics from my Nikon D5300, remember it's my first dslr and just got it in Nov...so still learning. All comments welcome.
1. Taken while out snowmobiling
2. Taken while on a hike in Glacier National Park - Fish Creek Drainage at Lake McDonald
3. My driveway on a cold winter night

I am also learning Lightroom - so any post editing suggestions welcome!


Very nice and your shots don't look like they are coming from a "newbie" keep posting.

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Apr 26, 2017 11:53:10   #
CPR Loc: Nature Coast of Florida
 
Well done. Makes me want to go there..

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