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Boudoir with a girl named Trip
Feb 1, 2017 06:37:00 #
I got a chance to shoot some Boudoir last weekned. Here is my first processed shot. Feedback and comments appreciated.
Feb 1, 2017 06:49:14 #
Feb 1, 2017 07:19:21 #
drbarrymary wrote:
Nice shot, Walt!
Barry
Barry
Thanks, Barry, glad you liked it.
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Feb 1, 2017 08:02:15 #
Tom G
Loc: Atlanta, GA
waltchilds wrote:
I got a chance to shoot some Boudoir last weekned. Here is my first processed shot. Feedback and comments appreciated.
A very subtle, but seductive pose. Very imaginative
Feb 1, 2017 09:27:46 #
I like it--nice work. I'm not sure what she's pointing her finger at, though.
Feb 1, 2017 10:31:37 #
Fine work. I'd be interested to see a version zoomed out a little more if you have any image left to work with.
Feb 1, 2017 11:16:12 #
A pretty girl with a seductive expression; but I see nothing remarkable about the image. Sorry.
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Feb 1, 2017 11:29:32 #
Feb 1, 2017 11:40:09 #
waltchilds wrote:
I got a chance to shoot some Boudoir last weekned. Here is my first processed shot. Feedback and comments appreciated.
Nice setting, good expression on the model who is well posed except her right hand looks awkward. Perhaps if she relax her hand and fingers to fall naturally onto the sheet.
Feb 2, 2017 00:37:39 #
Feb 2, 2017 06:10:51 #
Comments, I have to search... OK, as usual hands tell a story... her right hand has index finger straight the right hand should have a straight index finger. Yes, love the subtle Butt, however the face and the fingers are the story. Really great shot.
Yes, use straightening tool to make the bed post vertical .... picky pickly picky .... trivial comment
Yes, use straightening tool to make the bed post vertical .... picky pickly picky .... trivial comment
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Feb 2, 2017 06:45:53 #
lukan
Loc: Chicago, IL
I love her outfit. Her finger should be beckoning a "come here, come hither" motion instead of just pointing aimlessly. She's sexy!
Feb 2, 2017 07:38:30 #
Walt, this is a very seductive and inviting photo. If it was made for her lover, he will certainly get the message. I like the gradual u shape her head, body and legs make, it adds interest to the photo. The right hand toying with her hair adds even more to the sensual invitation. The angle you have her posed going accross the bed is very good.
Feb 2, 2017 07:55:55 #
waltchilds wrote:
I got a chance to shoot some Boudoir last weekned. Here is my first processed shot. Feedback and comments appreciated.
Hi Walt,
Good seeing you again. I like the pose, and the lighting looks pretty good. I think I would have had her extend all her fingers on her camera right hand instead of just the one as if she was pointing at something. Hands and fingers are always difficult to work with in an image. I do like her derriere which is subtle, but quite eye catching in the image. In the download, and then enlarged, the sharpness of her face seems to come out much better. I was going to say she wasn't focused very well until I did the download and then enlarged it. The one thing missing, which is needed, are the catchlights on her eyes. I think I see a hint of catchlights, but not strong at all! Did you use an off camera flash and just misplaced the light(s) a bit, or just used natural light?
Best Regards,
Tom
Feb 2, 2017 08:36:42 #
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