Just a country girl
Feb 8, 2016 09:03:25 #
Western theme shoot from this weekend. Any CC to help improve are always welcome
Feb 8, 2016 09:17:45 #
Feb 8, 2016 09:22:28 #
All are very nice but the Black and White is outstanding.
Nice job!
Nice job!
Feb 8, 2016 09:39:34 #
Feb 8, 2016 09:50:50 #
Feb 8, 2016 10:02:54 #
Bring your whites and your highlights down. They are even blown out in the B&W. Just a tad of saturation may help, but it is not necessary. Overall, quite nice!
Oh, and the horizon being off in the first one is a little distracting. I am afraid though, if you straighten it, it would probably cut a lot more of her out of the picture.
Oh, and the horizon being off in the first one is a little distracting. I am afraid though, if you straighten it, it would probably cut a lot more of her out of the picture.
Feb 8, 2016 10:19:09 #
tainkc wrote:
Bring your whites and your highlights down. They are even blown out in the B&W. Just a tad of saturation may help, but it is not necessary. Overall, quite nice!
Oh, and the horizon being off in the first one is a little distracting. I am afraid though, if you straighten it, it would probably cut a lot more of her out of the picture.
Oh, and the horizon being off in the first one is a little distracting. I am afraid though, if you straighten it, it would probably cut a lot more of her out of the picture.
Yes I see it now... Thanks
Feb 8, 2016 15:08:17 #
1Georgie wrote:
I always forget something stupid like a stick coming out of the models' head or something. Pretty girl.Yes I see it now... Thanks
Feb 8, 2016 15:24:23 #
tainkc wrote:
I always forget something stupid like a stick coming out of the models' head or something. Pretty girl.
I do the same thing.
Feb 8, 2016 15:39:05 #
1 Georgie - If this pretty gal is truly a cowgirl, to use an expression coined by Louis L'Amour, best-selling cowboy novelist of all-time, she'd be one to "ride the river with." Meaning she looks sturdy, trustworthy and companionable. Photographically speaking, the pictures are superb. :D :D :D :D
Feb 8, 2016 15:51:21 #
Jackel wrote:
1 Georgie - If this pretty gal is truly a cowgirl, to use an expression coined by Louis L'Amour, best-selling cowboy novelist of all-time, she'd be one to "ride the river with." Meaning she looks sturdy, trustworthy and companionable. Photographically speaking, the pictures are superb. :D :D :D :D
Thank you
Feb 8, 2016 16:02:59 #
The Mono is an outstanding portrait, superb work Georgie,
Geoff
Geoff
1Georgie wrote:
Western theme shoot from this weekend. Any CC to help improve are always welcome
Feb 9, 2016 06:35:43 #
Feb 9, 2016 07:42:26 #
I like the B&W the best, but I agree with some of the others, bring down the whites and highlights your blown out in a few spots.
Feb 9, 2016 10:36:11 #
May I get on my hobby horse about criticism on this forum.
These are really nice pictures of a very pretty model and well posed but someone said they are superb and, for reasons stated by others they are not superb.No one is going to improve unless defects are pointed out. Sloping horizon the obvious fault, blown out highlights and so om.The presenter realises this and takes it in a good spirit and will improve because of it.
There's me, grumpy old man again.
These are really nice pictures of a very pretty model and well posed but someone said they are superb and, for reasons stated by others they are not superb.No one is going to improve unless defects are pointed out. Sloping horizon the obvious fault, blown out highlights and so om.The presenter realises this and takes it in a good spirit and will improve because of it.
There's me, grumpy old man again.
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