Hi Guys
This is a revision of my entry for the WPC 1541 - Beer* contest. Which can be found here:
http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest.jsp?pcnum=191Original Critique:
http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-344021-1.htmlI plan to reshoot, but after the ideas suggested from the critique I took another look and made some slight adjustments to the original Raw file.
1. Exposure was reduced.*
2. Bottle was straightened slightly.
3. Crop adjusted slightly.
4. Little White Bug Masked off the Bottle neck.
Detail in the Bottle Label is substantially improved.
I think its much better?
A nice cold brew to celebrate changing the water pump on my car. No leaks, No leftover nuts and bolts, Just a busted knuckle or two. With the money I saved I can afford a new lens. A Premium Imported Polish light beer, yummy!!
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I like the changes you have made. The eye lands on the bottle and wants to stay there as it should. I like how the beer now gets the attention. The only regret -- not being able to drink it after the successful work.
Thanks pFrancke
I glad you like it.
The reshoot is now ready! Stay tuned.
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