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Comments welcomed!
Snap Shot wrote:
Best viewed in download.
Comments welcomed!
I like those squiggly lines.
Snap Shot wrote:
Best viewed in download.
Comments welcomed!
#2: I love the texture you achieved in this shot. Love the lines, colors, and light. But mostly the texture. That's what really caught my attention. I like the story that I can imagine. A shuttered window with the sweeping remnants of what had been there.
#3: Having seen #2, I don't think the addition of the upstairs windows adds to the photo. If you wanted a contrast, I would have cut the extraneous parts of the photo to concentrate just on the windows. If you wanted to capture the beautiful vines and contrast them to the empty pots, I would have cut the bottom window. What is eye-catching to me is that the vine on the right side of the photo looks 3-D - amazing!!!
#5: Oh my, but the texture of that wall is something to behold!!!! Again, I also love the colors, the light, the lines. I don't know why you have the stuff on the ground on the left side of the photo. I don't think it's strong enough to be part of the frame. And, since we (i.e., I) don't know what the metal thing is since it's not shown completely, it's a distraction to me. I would have cut it out and some of the vine on the left, using the vine as a frame and keeping the center of attention on the wall and the "architecture" of the other objects in the photo. Despite all the above, I love this photo!!!!
Snap Shot wrote:
Best viewed in download.
Comments welcomed!
Didn't see #6 before. Sorry.
It's perfect! Love your eye and your pp!!
Edie, that metal thing is an ashtray.
ediesaul wrote:
#2: I love the texture you achieved in this shot. Love the lines, colors, and light. But mostly the texture. That's what really caught my attention. I like the story that I can imagine. A shuttered window with the sweeping remnants of what had been there.
#3: Having seen #2, I don't think the addition of the upstairs windows adds to the photo. If you wanted a contrast, I would have cut the extraneous parts of the photo to concentrate just on the windows. If you wanted to capture the beautiful vines and contrast them to the empty pots, I would have cut the bottom window. What is eye-catching to me is that the vine on the right side of the photo looks 3-D - amazing!!!
#5: Oh my, but the texture of that wall is something to behold!!!! Again, I also love the colors, the light, the lines. I don't know why you have the stuff on the ground on the left side of the photo. I don't think it's strong enough to be part of the frame. And, since we (i.e., I) don't know what the metal thing is since it's not shown completely, it's a distraction to me. I would have cut it out and some of the vine on the left, using the vine as a frame and keeping the center of attention on the wall and the "architecture" of the other objects in the photo. Despite all the above, I love this photo!!!!
#2: I love the texture you achieved in this shot.... (
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Thanks so much for your critique! You've given me much to absorb and I really appreciate your time and effort in helping me make better compositions.
I'm redoing several photos as per your suggestions and agree 100%!
I just didn't think through the p.p. a much as I should have.
Thank you so much!!!
ebbote wrote:
Very good series Snap.
Thanks Ernest, as always!
rlaugh
Loc: Michigan & Florida
Fine set, love the simplicity of #2!
rlaugh wrote:
Fine set, love the simplicity of #2!
Thanks Bob! This was a great place for photos!
DickC
Loc: NE Washington state
Love the rusty doors in #2!! :D :D
DickC wrote:
Love the rusty doors in #2!! :D :D
Thanks for commenting Dick! It was a place filled with great shots!
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