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Jan 18, 2012 14:14:58   #
tainkc Loc: Kansas City
 
I shot this at a balloonfest here, in Kansas City. Which one has more impact? #1, or #2. I am leaning toward #1 myself. I am trying to improve my composition.

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#1...

#2
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Jan 18, 2012 14:37:13   #
Jay Pat Loc: Round Rock, Texas, USA
 
2
I'm closer.
Pat

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Jan 18, 2012 14:44:55   #
Bmac Loc: Long Island, NY
 
tainkc wrote:
I shot this at a balloonfest here, in Kansas City. Which one has more impact? #1, or #2. I am leaning toward #1 myself. I am trying to improve my composition.


I think #2 also. What if you eliminated the balloon on the right entirely in the crop. This would take the woman from dead center moving her to the right in the frame. I think it would make for a more interesting composition. Just a thought, it's a good shot as is.

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Jan 18, 2012 14:48:16   #
RMM Loc: Suburban New York
 
I like number 2 better. You filled the frame with subject matter, not grass. Do you prefer number 1 because it complies more closely with the rule of thirds? If so, you've got two photos here with conflicting rules, pick one. Either one works.

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Jan 18, 2012 15:02:24   #
tainkc Loc: Kansas City
 
RMM wrote:
I like number 2 better. You filled the frame with subject matter, not grass. Do you prefer number 1 because it complies more closely with the rule of thirds? If so, you've got two photos here with conflicting rules, pick one. Either one works.
No. The reason I like #1 better is that it gives me a better sense of perspective. It shows just how large the balloons really are. In #2, even though the grass is cut out (Obviously I did this on purpose), I got to thinking that she just as might be walking alongside a colorful wall.

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Jan 18, 2012 15:04:14   #
RMM Loc: Suburban New York
 
Fair enough. Method to the madness. :)

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Jan 18, 2012 15:04:46   #
tainkc Loc: Kansas City
 
RMM wrote:
Fair enough. Method to the madness. :)
I guess.

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Jan 18, 2012 15:13:04   #
photophly Loc: Old Bridge NJ
 
I like number two.....with less grass in the foreground it draws your eye to the person and ballons

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Jan 18, 2012 15:48:35   #
rballard29 Loc: Albuquerque, NM
 
Of the two, I like #2 best but maybe if you had just cropped the grass as you did and left the top part as it was it would be a little better.

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Jan 18, 2012 17:43:38   #
tainkc Loc: Kansas City
 
Bmac wrote:
tainkc wrote:
I shot this at a balloonfest here, in Kansas City. Which one has more impact? #1, or #2. I am leaning toward #1 myself. I am trying to improve my composition.


I think #2 also. What if you eliminated the balloon on the right entirely in the crop. This would take the woman from dead center moving her to the right in the frame. I think it would make for a more interesting composition. Just a thought, it's a good shot as is.
There are a thousand things one can do to these photos. I was just trying to show the immensity of the scene.

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Jan 18, 2012 17:45:02   #
tainkc Loc: Kansas City
 
No wonder why my composition always sucks. Everyone but me likes #2 the best! Lol.

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Jan 18, 2012 17:58:26   #
RMM Loc: Suburban New York
 
tainkc wrote:
No wonder why my composition always sucks. Everyone but me likes #2 the best! Lol.

You win!

Who cares what all these trolls think? (Which includes me.)

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Jan 18, 2012 23:01:12   #
AK Dreamer Loc: Alaska & Nevada
 
If you like #1 that's what counts. Personally, I like #2 but would crop it as others have mentioned on this thread. A crop where the lady is walking into the frame would still give a perspective.

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Jan 18, 2012 23:21:39   #
tainkc Loc: Kansas City
 
AK Dreamer wrote:
If you like #1 that's what counts. Personally, I like #2 but would crop it as others have mentioned on this thread. A crop where the lady is walking into the frame would still give a perspective.
Perhaps you are right. Maybe I am too engrossed in the enormity of what is being viewed.

Speaking of which, now I am being totally serious here, what is the subject in this photo? The girl, or the balloon(s)? The reason I ask is because the last time that I had an art class was back in junior high. Too me, it would be the balloons because that is what I was actually shooting. I was fortunate enough to have this lady walk by to give it some sense of perspective. I wonder if, in this case it could go either way?

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Jan 18, 2012 23:45:07   #
julesreyesmarko Loc: Los Angeles
 
I like #1, the contrast colors pop more. Or am I imagining it.

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