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After the Fire
Apr 17, 2024 21:27:24 #
Remnant of a shack in a New Mexico Ghost Town. In the color version, the nails are reddish. I was attracted to this due to the texture and shading. Probably underwhelming or a little too artsy. Anyhow, I like it.
Apr 17, 2024 22:27:41 #
I liked it, and the concept you were going for! Well done and good commentary.
Apr 18, 2024 07:33:13 #
The exposed nails at the bottom are fascinating. Like you, I find the textures and shading to be photogenic. I'm trying to do a bit more abstract-type compositions from reality, but often fail. And I never think of "artsy" as a negative term 
One consideration for this composition: the nails get a little lost in this tall aspect. Cropping a bit at both ends would strengthen the story IMO.
One consideration for this composition: the nails get a little lost in this tall aspect. Cropping a bit at both ends would strengthen the story IMO.
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Apr 18, 2024 11:42:34 #
Consider posting images with a larger pixel resolution. This image at 427-pixels wide doesn't offer much to see nor comment against.
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Apr 18, 2024 18:18:33 #
bonjac wrote:
Okay. Here's a revision.
If for me and my 'larger' comment, consider storing the original. Thx.
Apr 18, 2024 18:33:01 #
Apr 18, 2024 18:48:37 #
bonjac wrote:
Okay. Here's a revision.
Intriguing subject and composition. Following up on Linda's comment, I wonder if a square format- achieved by cropping off the top - would be better?
Apr 19, 2024 07:40:03 #
srt101fan wrote:
My suggestion isn't for a square aspect.Intriguing subject and composition. Following up on Linda's comment, I wonder if a square format- achieved by cropping off the top - would be better?
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