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May 31, 2022 18:41:30   #
Mr Bill 2011 Loc: southern Indiana
 
NickGee wrote:
There was an interesting thread about a month or so back in which we (the viewers) were asked to comment on and critique a photograph by Ansel Adams (Moonrise Hernandez New Mexico), but with the stipulation that we should treat the photo independently of anything we know about Adams, etc. That was a tough assignment since, among other things, Adams is a bit of a god here on UHH, and because the photo is so damn famous.

I'd like to try this again but with a far lesser known photo, by a photographer whom I've never heard mentioned on this site (so may be unfamiliar to many here). It won't be completely anonymous I suspect since I'm sure some of you will recognize the photo, or may recognize the style of the photographer (especially if you're a street photographer). If you do know the photo and/or the photographer, please don't drop a spoiler on the thread. I think the exercise of having a blind critique is a really good one and I'm hopeful we can learn from it.

You can see that the photo breaks many of the rules of photography that we've had drilled into us, but we also know that it's okay to break the rules if you need to in order to get the result you desire. How do you rate the rule-breaking on this one? Thumbs up or thumbs down? And why?

I think it will be great fun analyzing, dissecting, deconstructing this photo. Have at it!
There was an interesting thread about a month or s... (show quote)


The photo reminds me of a mid '50's Norman Rockwell painting if he accidentally brushed against it while it was still wet. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder; if I had taken it, I would delete it without a second thought! Just my opinion.

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May 31, 2022 18:43:37   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
srt101fan wrote:
I can see Gene's approach to critiques working in a class environment, but it seems to me even there it would only be useful up to a point. Does an artist always know what his/her intent is? Couldn't Ernst Haas have walked around New York trying to capture the hustle and bustle of the city without any specific messaging in mind for the individual images? Couldn't he have taken the subject picture as one of many, later looked at his contact sheet and decided that he liked it enough to include it in his book?
I can see Gene's approach to critiques working in ... (show quote)
Liked it "enough" to include in a book? OK, sure

Yes, it seems evident to me (without knowing anything about the photographer or his book) that he was attempting to capture the city's hustle and bustle. That is the message as I interpret the photo. How did he achieve that? With blur and tight framing. For me there's no doubt of what his intent was. So, reactions from viewers could be like/dislike, or dislike but understand the why of the presentation.

"Does an artist always know what his/her intent is?" My gut reaction is surely they must! I'd be happy to be educated further on that subject, however. Different thread?

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May 31, 2022 19:15:42   #
NickGee Loc: Pacific Northwest
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
Liked it "enough" to include in a book? OK, sure

Yes, it seems evident to me (without knowing anything about the photographer or his book) that he was attempting to capture the city's hustle and bustle. That is the message as I interpret the photo. How did he achieve that? With blur and tight framing. For me there's no doubt of what his intent was. So, reactions from viewers could be like/dislike, or dislike but understand the why of the presentation.

"Does an artist always know what his/her intent is?" My gut reaction is surely they must! I'd be happy to be educated further on that subject, however. Different thread?
Liked it "enough" to include in a book? ... (show quote)


I think you're spot on with both points. I agree with your thumbnail of the photographer's intention. I also agree that the really good ones (like Haas) are wholly intentional. This is film, not digital photography, after all. "Spray and pray" wasn't much use in those days. Looking for gold in a haystack is what amateurs like us do when we get home from a shoot. The pros in the film days worked differently (and most still do, I suspect).

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May 31, 2022 19:50:11   #
larryepage Loc: North Texas area
 
NickGee wrote:
I think you're spot on with both points. I agree with your thumbnail of the photographer's intention. I also agree that the really good ones (like Haas) are wholly intentional. This is film, not digital photography, after all. "Spray and pray" wasn't much use in those days. Looking for gold in a haystack is what amateurs like us do when we get home from a shoot. The pros in the film days worked differently (and most still do, I suspect).


I believe that lack of intentionality is very much a hallmark of a vast majority of the members here. Yes, there are a few exceptions, but precious few. Most here are not artists, but technicians hung up on equipment specifications, image sharpness, and "workflow." The invitation to an intelligent conversation about an image is totally lost on most here. In fact, it can be frightening. I am still learning how, but I realized long ago that this is a pretty poor place to do the learning. Too much opinion, too much masquerading, and too much dismissal.

I've been a photographic documentarian for a long time. Even after taking a couple of college-level photography classes many years ago, there was no ongoing support system to help me transition. But now I do have one, and photography is incredibly more fun. I've quit worrying and lusting about what next lens to buy. My last two new lenses were a lit more about ease and convenience than sharpness or distortion, and there are no more lens or camera purchases on the horizon (any horizon). It's been over two years since I've fired up Photoshop, and LightRoom only serves to make minor adjustments.

To me, the snide responses to discussions like this serve simply as an indication of cluelessness. There is no requirement to like the image presented here or any other image. But not being able to see beyond technique is simply an indication that the viewer or reviewer is not very far from the starting gate on their photographic journey.

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May 31, 2022 20:00:08   #
SuperflyTNT Loc: Manassas VA
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
The bigger point is the photographer presented the image exactly as he intended. I think most of us here have little to no experience with critique. Gene51 has stated a few times that when he's asked to provide feedback, the first thing he does is ask the photographer what they were hoping to achieve, what was their intent. Then they discuss how that could have been achieved more effectively (if applicable).

I used to be better about asking when For Your Consideration was particularly active with people interested in discussing their postings at length. I cringe when I read (in Critique Forum and elsewhere), with no knowledge of the photographer's choices, a respondent writes, "If it were my photo, the first thing I'd do is..."
The bigger point is the photographer presented the... (show quote)


So there’s a flip side to this. It’s one thing when a photographer asks for a critique of their own work. We can certainly ask their intent and advise on whether we think the intent comes through or make suggestions to make their intent more clear to the viewer, but the truth is that most of the time we view an image we can’t really know the photographer’s intent. If we enter photos in a competition the judges can’t know our intent, so really an image needs to stand on its own. I think a strong image can impact viewers differently. Sometimes there’s a more obvious story but often not. Sometimes the story or intent may be obvious but the image is still lacking impact. Many times when we offer critique we can only go by the visual impact. If I say I would crop something a certain way or open the shadows more in a certain section or adjust white balance I’m only doing it in relation to how o think the image might achieve more balance and look better and I think there’s validity in that. If I know their intent I might give different advice.

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May 31, 2022 20:26:05   #
srt101fan
 
NickGee wrote:
I think you're spot on with both points. I agree with your thumbnail of the photographer's intention. I also agree that the really good ones (like Haas) are wholly intentional. This is film, not digital photography, after all. "Spray and pray" wasn't much use in those days. Looking for gold in a haystack is what amateurs like us do when we get home from a shoot. The pros in the film days worked differently (and most still do, I suspect).


You're responding to Linda but it appears that you're addressing my post. Yes, as I said, Haas set out to capture the hustle and bustle of the big city. I think the photo you posted was part of a book project.

Your "spray and pray" comments puzzle me. I never said or alluded to Haas resorting to that practice. But it's ludicrous to believe that he had this image perfectly visualized in his mind, including the track of the vehicles and how to achieve the blur for this particular image.

If you think film photographers like Haas, the Nat Geo guys, fashion photographers, photojournalists and others always nailed it with each film shot you have apparently never seen their contact sheets.

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May 31, 2022 20:50:26   #
NickGee Loc: Pacific Northwest
 
srt101fan wrote:
You're responding to Linda but it appears that you're addressing my post. Yes, as I said, Haas set out to capture the hustle and bustle of the big city. I think the photo you posted was part of a book project.

Your "spray and pray" comments puzzle me. I never said or alluded to Haas resorting to that practice. But it's ludicrous to believe that he had this image perfectly visualized in his mind, including the track of the vehicles and how to achieve the blur for this particular image.

If you think film photographers like Haas, the Nat Geo guys, fashion photographers, photojournalists and others always nailed it with each film shot you have apparently never seen their contact sheets.
You're responding to Linda but it appears that you... (show quote)


No, I wasn't addressing your comment, and I'm not clear where you inferred all of this. My pray-spray comment addressed present-day, digital camera technique in the hands of amateurs like us. And what in the world would lead you to infer that I thought anyone (Anyone!) shoots 100%. Let's don't be quarrelsome (which is the UHH standard). Let's instead address the OP, whaddaya say?

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May 31, 2022 21:57:56   #
luvmypets Loc: Born & raised Texan living in Fayetteville NC
 
larryepage wrote:
I believe that lack of intentionality is very much a hallmark of a vast majority of the members here. Yes, there are a few exceptions, but precious few. Most here are not artists, but technicians hung up on equipment specifications, image sharpness, and "workflow." The invitation to an intelligent conversation about an image is totally lost on most here. In fact, it can be frightening. I am still learning how, but I realized long ago that this is a pretty poor place to do the learning. Too much opinion, too much masquerading, and too much dismissal.

I've been a photographic documentarian for a long time. Even after taking a couple of college-level photography classes many years ago, there was no ongoing support system to help me transition. But now I do have one, and photography is incredibly more fun. I've quit worrying and lusting about what next lens to buy. My last two new lenses were a lit more about ease and convenience than sharpness or distortion, and there are no more lens or camera purchases on the horizon (any horizon). It's been over two years since I've fired up Photoshop, and LightRoom only serves to make minor adjustments.

To me, the snide responses to discussions like this serve simply as an indication of cluelessness. There is no requirement to like the image presented here or any other image. But not being able to see beyond technique is simply an indication that the viewer or reviewer is not very far from the starting gate on their photographic journey.
I believe that lack of intentionality is very much... (show quote)



You mention having a support system to help you transition. Would you and/or any of the other more advanced/professional/artistic photographers consider doing the same for those looking to advance their photography? E. L. Shapiro set up a nice section for those wanting to learn about lighting.

You mentioned that this site is a poor place to learn so why not help change that? There would need to be more than one platform. One to help beginners who want to advance to an intermediate stage as well as a one for intermediates wanting to up their knowledge and technique.

In your Aug 17, 2017 post you encouraged helping others with their photography and as an educator, you know the importance of educating those who seek knowledge and the satisfaction of seeing the results of your guidance.

Dodie

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May 31, 2022 23:08:59   #
rmalarz Loc: Tempe, Arizona
 
I know of the photographer. I'm not overly impressed with the lack of sharpness throughout. Questions others posed such as subject, etc. I tend to be in agreement.

However, if one looks at these with the concept that the objects were transformed from what they are to what the photographer wanted them to be, it is an interesting photograph.
--Bob
NickGee wrote:
There was an interesting thread about a month or so back in which we (the viewers) were asked to comment on and critique a photograph by Ansel Adams (Moonrise Hernandez New Mexico), but with the stipulation that we should treat the photo independently of anything we know about Adams, etc. That was a tough assignment since, among other things, Adams is a bit of a god here on UHH, and because the photo is so damn famous.

I'd like to try this again but with a far lesser known photo, by a photographer whom I've never heard mentioned on this site (so may be unfamiliar to many here). It won't be completely anonymous I suspect since I'm sure some of you will recognize the photo, or may recognize the style of the photographer (especially if you're a street photographer). If you do know the photo and/or the photographer, please don't drop a spoiler on the thread. I think the exercise of having a blind critique is a really good one and I'm hopeful we can learn from it.

You can see that the photo breaks many of the rules of photography that we've had drilled into us, but we also know that it's okay to break the rules if you need to in order to get the result you desire. How do you rate the rule-breaking on this one? Thumbs up or thumbs down? And why?

I think it will be great fun analyzing, dissecting, deconstructing this photo. Have at it!
There was an interesting thread about a month or s... (show quote)

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Jun 1, 2022 01:04:21   #
RodeoMan Loc: St Joseph, Missouri
 
User ID wrote:
No isea what rules are being broken and I dont know whose photo that is.

It strikes me as a mildly interesting exercise in time, space, and color. Ive seen much better, including my own:


Well, of course, your own would be better.

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Jun 1, 2022 01:30:05   #
RodeoMan Loc: St Joseph, Missouri
 
Here is my take on this image.
Option one This image taken and posted by Rodeoman: Verdict. Why you wasting our time with this
gelatinous piece of crap.

Option two This exact same image made by Ernest Haas and posted to UHH: Verdict. What an interesting
juxtaposition of the myriad components describing the anxieties of the modern age we live in
with all its admixtures of color and form hurtling us toward our uncertain but nervous future. And
continued blather.

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Jun 1, 2022 04:57:14   #
selmslie Loc: Fernandina Beach, FL, USA
 
RodeoMan wrote:
Here is my take on this image.
Option one This image taken and posted by Rodeoman: Verdict. Why you wasting our time with this
gelatinous piece of crap. ...

Is that your opinion of your own images? You have never posted any.

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Jun 1, 2022 07:11:26   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Yes, the ask/give is what I was referencing about folks who are interested in having a conversation. I did confuse the original intent of Critique Forum vs. the later creation of For Your Consideration. In Critique Forum viewers were supposed to offer critique as you pointed out about competitions: with no background information. And with a finished product to be judged as presented.

Good points you've made, thanks!
SuperflyTNT wrote:
So there’s a flip side to this. It’s one thing when a photographer asks for a critique of their own work. We can certainly ask their intent and advise on whether we think the intent comes through or make suggestions to make their intent more clear to the viewer, but the truth is that most of the time we view an image we can’t really know the photographer’s intent. If we enter photos in a competition the judges can’t know our intent, so really an image needs to stand on its own. ...

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Jun 1, 2022 10:56:35   #
vungtau557 Loc: NC
 
i like the photo its thought provoking it stirs memories for some.

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Jun 1, 2022 11:13:34   #
Stephan G
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
Stephan, I'm confused by your comments. I wrote early on in this thread my reaction to the opening post photo (if that is the "it" you mean in your first sentence).

The cringing I mentioned - and was about to clarify before reading your comments - is regarding critique topics on UHH when there is no attempt to learn the photographer's intent - only a suggestion by the viewer of what they themselves would have done with the shot.

As I said to SuperflyTNT (whose quote I was responding to), the photo we are discussing in this thread is presented exactly as intended by the photographer. To suggest the photographer should have used a faster shutter speed says to me there is no attempt to understand why the choices were made.
Stephan, I'm confused by your comments. I wrote ea... (show quote)


Sorry, the trials of multiple points in comments. And timing of postings. I was just addressing your statement about "cringing".

I was just implying that interpretations will be as varied as the people making them. Present image and ask for views and interpretations. And that is what one gets, views and interpretations. And in this medium, we can expect ourselves to plunge into that spirit. With the time I have spent at the Chicago Art Institute halls, I learned a lot when it comes to viewing artwork. The best advice I got is "Ask yourself what is the story in what you are looking." And each time I came back to the work, I always found myself with a modified story. Sometimes, even a completely new story. (FWIW, the last thing I looked at was the blurb to the side of the work. I tried not to look at the numbers following the dollar sign.)

Many times, a photographer will not fully realize what they have shot until they are looking at an actual print. This is where the "story" gets redeveloped. (This does not include those photographers who are shooting to meet a "story".)

In my mind, the image is a starting point of the discussion. Whether the question is "Why did you do this?" or "Why I would do this?", it does begin the discussion to comprehend and understand both.

Too often, "Can't you see?" overpowers the more salient question "What do I see?"

I do have a problem with the thread header using the term, "analyzing". I lost my lab coat a long time ago.

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