Are the swinging crane arms necessary? I’d like to enter this to a photo contest in our locality.
I would rather they were not there.
For me the interest is in the top half. The bikers are kind of an everyday sight, their shadows are cut off at the bottom, and their silhouettes get lost with the dark background.
If your riders fit the theme you're entering, then yes - do away with the cranes. As-is, the composition has two separate and competing visuals.
luvmypets
Loc: Born & raised Texan living in Fayetteville NC
I agree with Linda from Maine that the crane arms are more interesting and that the two subjects compete.
Dodie
What if I did it with a 24mm lens?
hugEDhog wrote:
Are the swinging crane arms necessary? I’d like to enter this to a photo contest in our locality.
IMHO the swinging crane arms are more attractive than the bikers.Go with swinging arms and win.
Great contrast and interesting shapes.
hugEDhog wrote:
What if I did it with a 24mm lens?
The photo you posted shows shot with 23 mm already (Fujifilm X-100). What is the "it" you are referring to? What would you want to change?
I agree with Linda from Maine. The cyclists make a second area of interest & detract from the crane arms.
IMHO keep the cranes and ditch the bikes
Linda From Maine wrote:
The photo you posted shows shot with 23 mm already (Fujifilm X-100). What is the "it" you are referring to? What would you want to change?
Fujifilm x100v sensor is APS-C. Isn’t it converted to 35 mm with the 1.5 crop factor?
PixelStan77 wrote:
What do you think?
I think the visuals plus the clouds convey a fear factor. So to my mind they don’t compete rather they heighten the mood.
luvmypets
Loc: Born & raised Texan living in Fayetteville NC
hugEDhog wrote:
I think the visuals plus the clouds convey a fear factor. So to my mind they don’t compete rather they heighten the mood.
Ultimately, it's your photo and your decision. The good thing about asking for the opinion of others is it allows you to see your photo from different perspectives you get an idea of what appeals to others.
Best of luck in the contest!
Dodie
hugEDhog wrote:
Are the swinging crane arms necessary? I’d like to enter this to a photo contest in our locality.
As an image of "Delaware on the move" or "Moving past COVID", Yes, they are.
"I agree with Linda from Maine that the crane arms are more interesting and that the two subjects compete."
I am also in agreement with this. If you duplicate the background layer then in the layers palette select Screen the image will get less dark in those shadow areas showing more details. The cloud in the center will be slightly brighter but nothing that a selection of such cloud using the free hand selection tool and the Brightness-Contrast setting cannot improve. Just reduce contrast and brightness to taste.
I have never been able to understand how judges from hundred of entries are able to select an image as the "best one." For that reason I do not participate in contests where luck seems to be more important than art, or so it seems to me.
Good luck!.
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