I've posted some photos that i would like y'all t' critique. I woyld appreciate it if you would tell me what you see that you don't like, composition, colors, or whatever. I recently got Affinity photo and ON1, and I am working on the techniques that are available in the app. So, bring it on, I've got moxie!
Historic Farm somewhere in Kansas
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Clinton, IA
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Ripley St. Gargoyle, Davenport, IA
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This just might be your fathers Oldsmobile
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All we are is Rust in the Tin
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Back to skool
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South of Barstow, CA ~ The Devil's Playground
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Bike Bridge s.Concord to Credit Island
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For starters, 1, 2, 4, and the last one need straightened.
A little straitening is all I see.
Besides a little straightening in #6 Back to School has a twig or something hanging down from the top which should be removed -- its very distracting.
A little straightening, and on #3 and #8 looks like you replaced the skies the horizon line needs to be blended a little better in download you can see a small gap
Yep. Straighten your horizons. Otherwise, they look pretty good.
Yep. Straighten your horizons. Otherwise, they look pretty good.
Cmbtvet ~ the gap; yes that is obvious. I replaced the sky following ON1's process. I have had the same problem with other skies. The videos that explain the process use pretty flat horizons but I don't think they would release the code if the process is flawed. i'll try doing it again. Thanx.
Morning dieseldave - Number three (Gargoyle) is really very good. Perfect atmosphere and exposure.
All the best to you and yours,
Terry
Dave, I really liked the plant shot at Clinton, IA. What is the plant, a refinery?
Gracias,
No, I think that is mainly (I can't be certain where all the stacks come from) an ADM cogeneration plant A plant that burns both coal and leftover corn to generate electricity, but also uses the heat produced by the generators for heating various buildings. There were environmental concerns, but as you would expect ADM
opened the plant in 2010.
I like this set a lot. As to the straightening folks, telwidem. It's not that bad.
Ed
dieseldave wrote:
I've posted some photos that i would like y'all t' critique. I woyld appreciate it if you would tell me what you see that you don't like, composition, colors, or whatever. I recently got Affinity photo and ON1, and I am working on the techniques that are available in the app. So, bring it on, I've got moxie!
I like them all for different reasons and except for some leveling in few, I would print them up and frame them. Good Job sir.
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