Here are some pics from a wedding I 2nd shot a few weeks ago. Feel free to offer tips and comments
I love how you did close ups like this. Only 1 thing that I would do differently next time is to get the whole cake in the shot. Good Work!
gdwsr
Loc: Northern California
I like the DOF: provides just enough background to suggest the setting but not distract from the subject. I agree about including all of the subject in the frame, cake and the last flower. I am not sure the mood you were wanting to suggest but unless you were intentionally wanting a warm feel to the cake photo you adjust the white balance to get the color better balanced. I did a quick adjustment just for comparison.
White balanced cake
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Thanks. I do have several with the cake and a full cake shot.
# 1 is my favorite. What could you have done better? Not much, LUV IT!!
Nice ! This time you have taken amazing photos in a wedding. Now, I have understood your photography choice for a wedding because I have observed your almost wedding photographs.
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