Oops ...wrong section of UHH
Sep 6, 2023 17:24:44 #
~ OK! Again, lots of GREAT Help and Support was posted on Pt 1 & 2! Thanks to all who responded to this RAW newby!! 
- Now let's continue if you don't mind.... This subject was chosen only as a learning tool. Someday I may take a more appealing image, but for my School Project here, I chose this angle so as to be a challenge to myself. I shot it at f1.4 to add to the challenge difficulty (or maybe I should not add that variable??).
...Also, I'm guessing that Magenta fringe on the rooftop is Chromatic Aberration rearing its head from, again, shooting at f1.4! Interesting!
- Now let's continue if you don't mind.... This subject was chosen only as a learning tool. Someday I may take a more appealing image, but for my School Project here, I chose this angle so as to be a challenge to myself. I shot it at f1.4 to add to the challenge difficulty (or maybe I should not add that variable??).
...Also, I'm guessing that Magenta fringe on the rooftop is Chromatic Aberration rearing its head from, again, shooting at f1.4! Interesting!
Sep 7, 2023 06:32:29 #
I actually like the image. My only negative comment is the left side of the roof and the part that protrudes below the roof are a little "hot" even after your rework. Good eye in finding the shot though, nice textures and lines/angles.
Sep 7, 2023 11:08:28 #
JimmyTB wrote:
I actually like the image. My only negative comment is the left side of the roof and the part that protrudes below the roof are a little "hot" even after your rework. Good eye in finding the shot though, nice textures and lines/angles.
Thank you, JimmyTB!
Sep 7, 2023 19:38:39 #
Not sure what kind of critique you are looking for but to my eyes...
1) Composition: The colorful "television-like" image on the right competes with your subject (the bird feeder).
2) The subject is not clear. The right corner back of the feeder is the only thing in focus--is this what you intended? If so, what is it saying.
3) Detail in the highlights is gone due to over exposure; this cannot be fixed in post. Better to shoot 1/2 stop under and "bring it up" because there will still be information in the highlighs.
4) Because there is limited color range, consider rendering in B&W.
1) Composition: The colorful "television-like" image on the right competes with your subject (the bird feeder).
2) The subject is not clear. The right corner back of the feeder is the only thing in focus--is this what you intended? If so, what is it saying.
3) Detail in the highlights is gone due to over exposure; this cannot be fixed in post. Better to shoot 1/2 stop under and "bring it up" because there will still be information in the highlighs.
4) Because there is limited color range, consider rendering in B&W.
Sep 8, 2023 10:52:59 #
dat2ra wrote:
Not sure what kind of critique you are looking for... (show quote)
Yeah, honestly wasn't looking for a Critique as I put this in the wrong UHH section! However... Your observation is still viable and good info!! Thank you, dat2ra!
Sep 8, 2023 14:29:13 #
yorkiebyte wrote:
~ OK! Again, lots of GREAT Help and Support was po... (show quote)
Magnificent photo to illustrate the concept.
I do need your permission to hang it on my wall however.
Sep 8, 2023 17:14:02 #
srg wrote:
Magnificent photo to illustrate the concept.
I do need your permission to hang it on my wall however.
I do need your permission to hang it on my wall however.
Now That's the funniest thing I've heard/seen written all day! (However, I've only been out to take the Yorkies for a walk.... So, there's still a chance....
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