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Jun 23, 2023 07:26:23   #
FunkyL Loc: MD
 
August 2019, Waterlilies in Carroll Creek, downtown Frederick MD


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Jun 23, 2023 09:03:02   #
lamiaceae Loc: San Luis Obispo County, CA
 

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Jun 24, 2023 07:45:20   #
dpullum Loc: Tampa Florida
 
Simple, quiet, beautiful.

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Jun 24, 2023 08:43:54   #
FunkyL Loc: MD
 
dpullum wrote:
Simple, quiet, beautiful.


Thank you, dpullum!

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Jun 24, 2023 08:44:52   #
FunkyL Loc: MD
 
lamiaceae wrote:


Thanks, lamiaceae

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Jun 24, 2023 14:09:12   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
Critique? Why, I like it just as it is

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Jun 25, 2023 20:09:39   #
photogeneralist Loc: Lopez Island Washington State
 
Overall it's a good photo, as the other prior commenters have noted. However it (IMHO) could be improved with judicious cropping so that the main blossom is at the bottom right 3rds intersection and the secondary blossom is the the top left. I think that this eliminates some superfluous foliage etc and makes the subject stronger. Of course there are different strokes>>>>>>folks.

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Jun 26, 2023 08:02:34   #
FunkyL Loc: MD
 
photogeneralist wrote:
Overall it's a good photo, as the other prior commenters have noted. However it (IMHO) could be improved with judicious cropping so that the main blossom is at the bottom right 3rds intersection and the secondary blossom is the the top left. I think that this eliminates some superfluous foliage etc and makes the subject stronger. Of course there are different strokes>>>>>>folks.


Thanks, photogeneralist. Is this what you had in mind? I agree the foliage on the right side doesn't add much....I was taken by the appearance that the photo was taken in some deep, dark, overgrown swamp, while I knew the plants were all in pots in a shallow cement lined urban creek bordered by wide open brick walkways with shops and restaurants... not something a viewer would know.


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Jun 27, 2023 07:20:35   #
Tjohn Loc: Inverness, FL formerly Arivaca, AZ
 

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Jun 27, 2023 15:14:24   #
photogeneralist Loc: Lopez Island Washington State
 
FunkyL wrote:
Thanks, photogeneralist. Is this what you had in mind? I agree the foliage on the right side doesn't add much....I was taken by the appearance that the photo was taken in some deep, dark, overgrown swamp, while I knew the plants were all in pots in a shallow cement lined urban creek bordered by wide open brick walkways with shops and restaurants... not something a viewer would know.


Yes!!!!!

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Jun 27, 2023 19:38:10   #
FunkyL Loc: MD
 
Tjohn wrote:


Thanks, Tjohn!

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Jun 27, 2023 19:39:11   #
FunkyL Loc: MD
 
photogeneralist wrote:
Yes!!!!!


Thanks for your suggestion photogeneralist, I like it!

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Jun 29, 2023 09:12:14   #
magnetoman Loc: Purbeck, Dorset, UK
 
I like both versions, cropped and not, but for me the ‘not’ wins as it gives setting, just like your original intention. I like that sort of detail.

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Jun 29, 2023 13:17:10   #
FunkyL Loc: MD
 
magnetoman wrote:
I like both versions, cropped and not, but for me the ‘not’ wins as it gives setting, just like your original intention. I like that sort of detail.


Thanks Magnetoman!

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