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Apr 19, 2023 18:21:26   #
kbwheeler Loc: Fremont, California
 
Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?





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Apr 19, 2023 18:52:21   #
wdross Loc: Castle Rock, Colorado
 
kbwheeler wrote:
Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?


I would crop some from the right on the first image and crop some from the left on the second image. Maybe slight increase in contrast. Or slightly increase in shadow details. Good shots anyway.

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Apr 19, 2023 18:55:52   #
rmalarz Loc: Tempe, Arizona
 
That would depend on your "vision" of the scene when taking the photograph.

Personally, I'd prefer to see a bit more detail (trees) on the mountainside of the first one.
--Bob

kbwheeler wrote:
Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?

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Apr 19, 2023 21:32:54   #
Cany143 Loc: SE Utah
 
No, they're not 'too' contrasty. If anything, the first is --compositionally so, though ever so slightly, but sufficiently so that there's an overall un-balanced aspect-- im-balancement in the image. Beyond that, if anything could have been 'improved', an increased amount of detail (as Bob mentioned above, and in the blacks/whites, too) in the trees would conceivably have 'bettered' the image.

Granted, this is little more than a subjective response, and I recognize that 'subjective' is relative to whatever intents I might 'want' or 'expect' or 'hope' to see in an image -vs- those of yours, but they're subjective all the same.

You should 'do' what YOUR subjective intents are/may've been. Mine are merely academic.

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Apr 19, 2023 21:46:42   #
Cany143 Loc: SE Utah
 
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Apr 19, 2023 22:25:57   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
I agree with Cany. But they are your pictures, not mine.

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Apr 20, 2023 00:03:05   #
Cany143 Loc: SE Utah
 
Cany143 wrote:
No, they're not 'too' contrasty. If anything, they might not be (highly selectively) not contrasty enout. More saliently, the first is --compositionally, though ever so slightly, but sufficiently so that there's an un-balanced aspect overall-- a lack of balance (compositionally, tonally, 'weight-wise', in the image that doesn't do it justice. Beyond that, if anything could have been 'improved', an increased amount of detail (as Bob mentioned above, but selectively, and locally, in the blacks/whites as well) in the trees (and elsewhere) would conceivably have 'bettered' the image.

Granted, this is little more than a (my) subjective response, and I recognize that (my) 'subjective' may likely be counter to or relative to whatever intents I might 'want' or 'expect' or 'hope' to see in an image -vs- the same intenty you may have in yours, but either way, they're subjective all the same.

You should 'do' what YOUR subjective intents are/may've been. Mine are simply academic.
No, they're not 'too' contrasty. If anything, the... (show quote)

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Apr 20, 2023 01:30:54   #
Cany143 Loc: SE Utah
 
Cany143 wrote:
No, they're not 'too' contrasty. If anything, the first is --compositionally so, though ever so slightly, but sufficiently so that there's an overall un-balanced aspect-- im-balancement in the image. Beyond that, if anything could have been 'improved', an increased amount of detail (as Bob mentioned above, --or more accurately, better separation between -- in the blacks/whites, too) in the trees would conceivably have 'bettered' the image.

Granted, this is little more than a subjective response, and I recognize that 'subjective' is relative to whatever intents I might 'want' or 'expect' or 'hope' to see in an image -vs- those of yours, but they're subjective all the same.

You should 'do' what YOUR subjective intents are/may've been. Mine are merely academic.
No, they're not 'too' contrasty. If anything, the... (show quote)

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Apr 20, 2023 06:18:34   #
R.G. Loc: Scotland
 
The only thing which indicates that it's not just an underexposed photo is the overcast sky. The stormy sky is the reason for the sombre mood. That could be enhanced if the highlights in the sky were toned down a bit.

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Apr 20, 2023 07:50:38   #
mvetrano2 Loc: Commack, NY
 
I think they would both be better in color!

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Apr 20, 2023 13:51:14   #
srg
 
kbwheeler wrote:
Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?


Color would be a good start.

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May 27, 2023 05:29:53   #
National Park
 
Nice work! I like the first one a lot and like the B&W. I agree with others that the photo might be strengthened if some of the right side were cropped. Also, my eye is drawn to the black part of the hill, but there is nothing there but black to see. I think the photo would be much stronger if this were lightened, assuming that this area hasn't been blown out.

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Aug 26, 2023 15:51:51   #
BboH Loc: s of 2/21, Ellicott City, MD
 
I like them as is.

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