Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?
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kbwheeler wrote:
Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?
I would crop some from the right on the first image and crop some from the left on the second image. Maybe slight increase in contrast. Or slightly increase in shadow details. Good shots anyway.
That would depend on your "vision" of the scene when taking the photograph.
Personally, I'd prefer to see a bit more detail (trees) on the mountainside of the first one.
--Bob
kbwheeler wrote:
Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?
No, they're not 'too' contrasty. If anything, the first is --compositionally so, though ever so slightly, but sufficiently so that there's an overall un-balanced aspect-- im-balancement in the image. Beyond that, if anything could have been 'improved', an increased amount of detail (as Bob mentioned above, and in the blacks/whites, too) in the trees would conceivably have 'bettered' the image.
Granted, this is little more than a subjective response, and I recognize that 'subjective' is relative to whatever intents I might 'want' or 'expect' or 'hope' to see in an image -vs- those of yours, but they're subjective all the same.
You should 'do' what YOUR subjective intents are/may've been. Mine are merely academic.
I agree with Cany. But they are your pictures, not mine.
The only thing which indicates that it's not just an underexposed photo is the overcast sky. The stormy sky is the reason for the sombre mood. That could be enhanced if the highlights in the sky were toned down a bit.
I think they would both be better in color!
kbwheeler wrote:
Two photos taken in Tasmania, Australia. Waning light on a beautiful lake. Are these too contrasty? Too dark? Thoughts?
Color would be a good start.
Nice work! I like the first one a lot and like the B&W. I agree with others that the photo might be strengthened if some of the right side were cropped. Also, my eye is drawn to the black part of the hill, but there is nothing there but black to see. I think the photo would be much stronger if this were lightened, assuming that this area hasn't been blown out.
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