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Aug 15, 2022 21:53:40   #
Fotoartist Loc: Detroit, Michigan
 
I complied this for a topic along the lines of, 'Wood and Water'. The sculpture is mine. All photos used are mine except the jumping dolphin in the bkg. I am wondering if the dolphin in the bkg. adds, adds too much, or not enough to the picture. I value all comments. Thank you. I see the blue is a little intense.



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Aug 16, 2022 01:10:00   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
Beautifully done.

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Aug 16, 2022 08:09:35   #
NJFrank Loc: New Jersey
 
Overall I like it. But as you mentioned the water is awfully blue. As for the dolphin, perhaps closer to the horizon and smaller. I find my eyes bouncing back and forth on the dolphin and the sculpture.

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Aug 16, 2022 08:21:24   #
Steve DeMott Loc: St. Louis, Missouri (Oakville area)
 
Beautiful Sculpture, nice lighting & composite, but personally, Loss the dolphin. The hero is your sculpture. I would move it to the left and darken the background.

Just my opinion and we know how that equates to some body parts
Steve

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Aug 16, 2022 08:30:45   #
magnetoman Loc: Purbeck, Dorset, UK
 
I find the added dolphin a distraction. I’m also a bit concerned about the piece of birch your sculpture sits upon - it sort of hovers between looking as if it’s half in the water and not quite being anchored to the grass area? You’ve got the blue covered.
That’s a beautiful sculpture, and very relevant to our nearest town, Swanage, in Dorset UK, where there are regular dolphin sitings and, hence, much made of the dolphins image around town. May I ask what wood you’ve used?

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Aug 16, 2022 09:44:58   #
Fotoartist Loc: Detroit, Michigan
 
Thanks guys for your comments. Seems to be in favor of ditching the dolphin so far. Birch tree sculpture.

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Aug 16, 2022 09:48:05   #
lnl Loc: SWFL
 
I guess I’m odd man out. I like the dolphin as he/she repeats the angle of the sculpture. It also adds interest to the picture which otherwise only has the beautiful sculpture.

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Aug 16, 2022 11:11:05   #
sippyjug104 Loc: Missouri
 
Way cool..!

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Aug 16, 2022 13:57:43   #
srg
 
Fotoartist wrote:
I complied this for a topic along the lines of, 'Wood and Water'. The sculpture is mine. All photos used are mine except the jumping dolphin in the bkg. I am wondering if the dolphin in the bkg. adds, adds too much, or not enough to the picture. I value all comments. Thank you. I see the blue is a little intense.


Incredible sculpture, great photo too

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Aug 16, 2022 18:22:47   #
Horseart Loc: Alabama
 
Fotoartist wrote:
I complied this for a topic along the lines of, 'Wood and Water'. The sculpture is mine. All photos used are mine except the jumping dolphin in the bkg. I am wondering if the dolphin in the bkg. adds, adds too much, or not enough to the picture. I value all comments. Thank you. I see the blue is a little intense.


JMHO. I think it's beautiful. I think it's perfect just as it is. It's OK if the water is a bit too blue. I think that's what makes the whole image POP!!!! The sculpture is fantastic!

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Aug 16, 2022 18:26:51   #
Horseart Loc: Alabama
 
Fotoartist wrote:
Thanks guys for your comments. Seems to be in favor of ditching the dolphin so far. Birch tree sculpture.


OH NO! Please don't ditch the Dolphin! JMHO again...I think he BELONGS there. I think he shows that the birch tree dolphins look exactly as they should.

If you feel you must ditch him, please at least save a copy with him left in it.

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Aug 16, 2022 19:18:18   #
srg
 
Fotoartist wrote:
Thanks guys for your comments. Seems to be in favor of ditching the dolphin so far. Birch tree sculpture.


Keep the dolphin

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Aug 16, 2022 21:17:34   #
Fotoartist Loc: Detroit, Michigan
 
srg wrote:
Keep the dolphin


Thanks everyone for your comments. I did save the one with the dolphin in the bkg. But I worked up the version without it too, now.



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Aug 16, 2022 22:01:06   #
Horseart Loc: Alabama
 
Fotoartist wrote:
Thanks everyone for your comments. I did save the one with the dolphin in the bkg. But I worked up the version without it too, now.


I have a feeling that you couldn't ruin it if you tried!!!!

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Aug 17, 2022 02:49:29   #
magnetoman Loc: Purbeck, Dorset, UK
 
Fotoartist wrote:
Thanks everyone for your comments. I did save the one with the dolphin in the bkg. But I worked up the version without it too, now.


That looks good to me, you’ve brought it together very nicely.

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