Nice work, I have taken several of Tim Shields courses, another landscape photographer I follow is Serge Ramelli. Serge's advice on processing is to be subtle, i.e. your photos should still look natural and believable, which I think your work does well.
GIGO usually applies. I like the second transformation. The first nothing can help.
IMHO the first one grabs my attention and literally makes me want to be there. The others not so much.
m43rebel wrote:
I happen to see a video by Tim Shields who is a successful landscape photographer. He proposed that landscapes should tell a story with some elements of drama to be more interesting to the viewer. He uses Lightroom to create interest in previously uninteresting views.
There are many software options to accomplish this transformation. I happened to experiment with Luminar Neo to see what was possible. Previously, I tended toward a more realistic approach with some minor tweaking. But with the following before and after photos, I took Tim's advice and tried to bring a dramatic storyline into play.
The first is a picture of a high meadow above the Provo River in Utah, not far from my home. The initial shot lacks focus and is dull. So I changed it from a noon scene to a near sunset to the left, with storm clouds of a pending storm.
The second is a photo of Maple Mountain across Utah Lake. The original is pleasant enough, and is accurate as to what the eye saw at the time. But I chose to have the sun setting lower to the right with the hint of the pending end of the storm.
You be the judge of which photos are more pleasing to the eye and evoke an emotional response.
I welcome your experience and insights.
By the way, both photos were taken with an Olympus E-M10.1 with a Panasonic 12-32mm zoom.
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Interesting. However the overly yellow cast on the trees in #2 should also be on the background mountains if we are to believe that it is due to a setting sun.
An early morning study in painting-of an abounded barn-with a handheld LED pocket light, extended exposure
Really nice processing. Thanks for sharing
Fran
I like them both, nice work!
m43rebel wrote:
I happen to see a video by Tim Shields who is a successful landscape photographer. He proposed that landscapes should tell a story with some elements of drama to be more interesting to the viewer. He uses Lightroom to create interest in previously uninteresting views.
There are many software options to accomplish this transformation. I happened to experiment with Luminar Neo to see what was possible. Previously, I tended toward a more realistic approach with some minor tweaking. But with the following before and after photos, I took Tim's advice and tried to bring a dramatic storyline into play.
The first is a picture of a high meadow above the Provo River in Utah, not far from my home. The initial shot lacks focus and is dull. So I changed it from a noon scene to a near sunset to the left, with storm clouds of a pending storm.
The second is a photo of Maple Mountain across Utah Lake. The original is pleasant enough, and is accurate as to what the eye saw at the time. But I chose to have the sun setting lower to the right with the hint of the pending end of the storm.
You be the judge of which photos are more pleasing to the eye and evoke an emotional response.
I welcome your experience and insights.
By the way, both photos were taken with an Olympus E-M10.1 with a Panasonic 12-32mm zoom.
I happen to see a video by Tim Shields who is a su... (
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Nice set, Rebel! I love ##3 & 4, among others.
m43rebel wrote:
I happen to see a video by Tim Shields who is a successful landscape photographer. He proposed that landscapes should tell a story with some elements of drama to be more interesting to the viewer. He uses Lightroom to create interest in previously uninteresting views.
There are many software options to accomplish this transformation. I happened to experiment with Luminar Neo to see what was possible. Previously, I tended toward a more realistic approach with some minor tweaking. But with the following before and after photos, I took Tim's advice and tried to bring a dramatic storyline into play.
The first is a picture of a high meadow above the Provo River in Utah, not far from my home. The initial shot lacks focus and is dull. So I changed it from a noon scene to a near sunset to the left, with storm clouds of a pending storm.
The second is a photo of Maple Mountain across Utah Lake. The original is pleasant enough, and is accurate as to what the eye saw at the time. But I chose to have the sun setting lower to the right with the hint of the pending end of the storm.
You be the judge of which photos are more pleasing to the eye and evoke an emotional response.
I welcome your experience and insights.
By the way, both photos were taken with an Olympus E-M10.1 with a Panasonic 12-32mm zoom.
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The interest definitely improves! Thanx for sharing!
I like the black and white effect, especially being able to see the stars.
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