Just a couple of shots from a shoot with a friend!
In my opinion, the poses are very unflattering and do nothing for the model. I wonder what she thinks of them and does she even know they are posted here?
Thanks for posting these, she is a beautiful girl. Chip, these poses are not up to the standard of other images that you have posted in this section. I’m wondering if rushing to get out of the cold played a role in trying to get a couple of quick shots.
The skin tones are a bit on the cold side and the images could use a general softening, maybe through editing or opening up your lens and shooting the eyes as the focal point at F 1.8. Even the leanest model might present folds in her back and side and you should get in the habit of softening the shadows in these. If your try to eliminate them it will be obvious, but you can go a long way to reducing them without the editing being evident.
I agree with The Watcher that your choice of poses doesn't flatter the model very well, the low angle shot especially.
InfiniteISO wrote:
The skin tones are a bit on the cold side and the images could use a general softening, maybe through editing or opening up your lens and shooting the eyes as the focal point at F 1.8. Even the leanest model might present folds in her back and side and you should get in the habit of softening the shadows in these. If your try to eliminate them it will be obvious, but you can go a long way to reducing them without the editing being evident.
I agree with The Watcher that your choice of poses doesn't flatter the model very well, the low angle shot especially.
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I would add she's a very nice model but I agree with the comments.
Interesting, lovely headshot on the first one - forget the bottoms of both images.
The background on the second image is distracting.
Try cropping the first image just above the areola, and tighten up on the right hand side, you'll be surprised at how much better, IMO, it becomes...
Pretty face. Nipple piercing is not my taste.
Nice model. I agree with previous comments. Also, up-the-nose shots are not my fave, and I'm not a fan of the tongue in #1. She's definitely worth a re-shoot :-)
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