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Comments, please (part 2)
Mar 6, 2021 18:38:30 #
I've been working on something that pleased her, with a more revealing yet old fashioned look. This was taken with an old T3 workhorse that just keeps on going. Please be gentle as she is going on 68. Thanks, guys.
Mar 6, 2021 19:34:11 #
austringer wrote:
I've been working on something that pleased her, with a more revealing yet old fashioned look. This was taken with an old T3 workhorse that just keeps on going. Please be gentle as she is going on 68. Thanks, guys.
The pose is great
Lighting is perfect
You did a great job in capturing her.
What she is leaning on I find it visually distracting
Mar 6, 2021 20:44:16 #
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Mar 7, 2021 01:35:23 #
The actual pose is a great angle and shows her fitness. Just suggested something like this on original first photo before I saw this one. Assuming extreme crop is to protect her identify, otherwise few nudes do justice when a model has been decapitated or limbs cut off. And, in this case the mattress is so soft her hand disappeared too.
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Mar 8, 2021 14:36:45 #
Mar 8, 2021 14:47:48 #
Good work on the posing and processing. I think her black right hand is distracting (I don't know if you call pull that out in PP) but it could have been lit with a reflector. Also, I'd smooth out the back of her right thigh a bit. But the main points are spot on. Thanks.
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