Took this picture of my grandchildren at sunset yesterday. Would like your thoughts. This was my first try at it and I think it turned out great.
my thoughts...I like it, a lot. Could do with less dark area at the bottom of pic though.
Thanks for the feedback :-)
Yes, crop a bit of the sky and a bit of the dark. But you have a winner!
sinatraman
Loc: Vero Beach Florida, Earth,alpha quaudrant
i would not put thhe grandchildren in the exact center of the frame. Off to either side would give stronger impact. I refer you to the rule of thirds! other then that the photo is quite lovely
cosmo54
Loc: Easton, PA but will travel for photos
Barb i think it is beautiful just the way it is!!! crop if you like, or don't. :-)
I think it's a very cool shot and like people said, a little cropping will make it pop.
Barb Jewett wrote:
Took this picture of my grandchildren at sunset yesterday. Would like your thoughts. This was my first try at it and I think it turned out great.
I too think it turned out great. As for the comment regarding the rule of thirds. . .the real magic happens when you know when to break the rules. This is one of those magic times. If you change your image to comply with the suggestions of others, then it is no longer your vision.
Stunning image as is!
Well done. It's a unique and creative shot.
Dodger
Loc: Melbourne Australia
Nice shot Barb, well done
My thoughts are that a little crop to the top, left and right would improve it.
A lovely shot as it is though
Archy
Loc: Lake Hamilton, Florida
Barb Jewett wrote:
Took this picture of my grandchildren at sunset yesterday. Would like your thoughts. This was my first try at it and I think it turned out great.
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i see life and light overcoming darkness. light always dispels darkness. life comes from light. very well done! applause!!!
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