please take a look
Sep 23, 2012 05:48:46 #
Hi all here is some of my best work please let me know what you think and ways to improve all comments will be greatly received. I will add more later.
thanks Joe
thanks Joe
Sep 23, 2012 05:53:31 #
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Sep 23, 2012 07:21:27 #
donrent
Loc: Punta Gorda , Fl
That first pose is , well, uh, sorta looks like she is, well, you know ...................
Sep 23, 2012 10:06:57 #
ok what do you think to the photo in general the exposure and sharpness
Sep 23, 2012 12:31:37 #
Exposures look good, composition good. The 1st picture could be posed a little different, maybe thinking of thirds but still good.
Sarge69
Sarge69
Sep 23, 2012 12:36:13 #
sarge69 wrote:
Exposures look good, composition good. The 1st picture could be posed a little different, maybe thinking of thirds but still good.
Sarge69
Sarge69
thank you :thumbup:
Sep 23, 2012 18:41:51 #
In the first picture if the woman was off to the side you could see the length of the bridge.And it would have pulled you into the picture more.
Sep 23, 2012 19:01:30 #
With the exception of REALLY skinny women, it is seldom a good idea to photograph any female straight on as it makes them wider. That pose in #1 is just not flattering. Also, you were out in the direct sun and that has blown out the highlights on her left side and she is squinting in the harsh light.
#2 is pretty good. Still have that unflattering sunlight, but at least she is turned a bit and that will narrow the shoulders. The leaves hides her body, so no issues there. Her arms are hanging straight down and it would look nicer if a hand were on a hip or if she were holding something like one of those flowers. (hands and arms are tough).
The running dog image is cute. I would crop it tighter, but that is just my choice.
The last image has a blue thing in what is a B&W image. Why? Cute dog and cute image, but why is that thing blue?
The dog's eyes would benefit from a catchlight just as human eyes do. Eyes without a catchlight have no "life."
#2 is pretty good. Still have that unflattering sunlight, but at least she is turned a bit and that will narrow the shoulders. The leaves hides her body, so no issues there. Her arms are hanging straight down and it would look nicer if a hand were on a hip or if she were holding something like one of those flowers. (hands and arms are tough).
The running dog image is cute. I would crop it tighter, but that is just my choice.
The last image has a blue thing in what is a B&W image. Why? Cute dog and cute image, but why is that thing blue?
The dog's eyes would benefit from a catchlight just as human eyes do. Eyes without a catchlight have no "life."
Sep 24, 2012 07:51:28 #
CaptainC wrote:
With the exception of REALLY skinny women, it is s... (show quote)
Thank you this is the kind of reply I was looking for I will take your advice and use it in future shots and post for opinions.
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Sep 24, 2012 11:13:51 #
Sep 24, 2012 15:16:38 #
Loved all the shots. Of course , my jack russel jake liked them too! Thanks. Henry
Sep 24, 2012 15:42:08 #
I dont care for the composition or lighting in the first picture. I agree that if she were off to the side and maybe standing, that it might be more appealing.
I like the second one. The light is a little harsh, but the color and vibrancy is wonderful. It is a more flattering picture of your subject.
I love the action of the dog captured. Focus is wonderful.
I Iike the B & W with the colored toy. Is this soft focused or is it just me?
I like the second one. The light is a little harsh, but the color and vibrancy is wonderful. It is a more flattering picture of your subject.
I love the action of the dog captured. Focus is wonderful.
I Iike the B & W with the colored toy. Is this soft focused or is it just me?
Sep 24, 2012 16:28:58 #
I liked the 2nd and 4th the best however I have to say I also noticed your avatar picture and I think that it is super composition and a great shot. You should have that framed.
Sep 25, 2012 02:20:07 #
Farmers Wife wrote:
Love the little dog
thank you he's my mums dog this was taken out on a walk i think it works really nicely
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