First post in this category...
All this time on UHH and I have never contributed to this section. So I thought I'd post a few for your critique and hopefully enjoyment. The attached are from one of the most enjoyable weddings I have ever done.
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Loc: Hellertown PA
I might have even enjoyed those weddings myself! Very nice job!
DanielB wrote:
All this time on UHH and I have never contributed to this section. So I thought I'd post a few for your critique and hopefully enjoyment. The attached are from one of the most enjoyable weddings I have ever done.
Hey Daniel, Thanks for posting. I have been absent from UH and this section for a while as have many. Glad to see you are injecting some new life. Great set from this wedding. Some creative poses with the Posse, and the girls plus flower girl on the bed with kimonos?. My favorite is the expression of the groom in the last image. Not quite sure what he and the bride are holding, but I am sure it is special to them.
Keep posting! I only do word of mouth weddings anymore, however I will keep checking in.
jaysnave wrote:
Hey Daniel, Thanks for posting. I have been absent from UH and this section for a while as have many. Glad to see you are injecting some new life. Great set from this wedding. Some creative poses with the Posse, and the girls plus flower girl on the bed with kimonos?. My favorite is the expression of the groom in the last image. Not quite sure what he and the bride are holding, but I am sure it is special to them.
Keep posting! I only do word of mouth weddings anymore, however I will keep checking in.
Hey Daniel, Thanks for posting. I have been abse... (
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Then groom is a real joker and pulled out a Ring Pop for the wedding ring.
DanielB wrote:
All this time on UHH and I have never contributed to this section. So I thought I'd post a few for your critique and hopefully enjoyment. The attached are from one of the most enjoyable weddings I have ever done.
This is a comment on #3.
I looked at this and realized the work - from the bride - that was done...
Color coordinated outfits - Check
Originality of outfits - Check
Similar hairstyles - Check (only one had bangs, but you cannot grow hairs in minutes)
Nail polish are similar with some variation - Check
The neckless are not visible but on three of the bridesmaids, yet on the ceremony they all have the same. Not a check but there too you see the hand of the bride.
Then on YOUR work.
Composition? Great. The flower girl in line with the bride, sitting or kneeling on her back makes the picture.
Lighting? No harsh shadow. Good
Ceasing the moment where all have a good expression? Really nicely done.
You and the bride pulled it off.-------
The beach picture? While everything is in focus and well exposed I do not see much at all that is positive.
I have a couple of issues, the raccoon eyes by example.
All my comments would be related to the harshness of the setting but for one...
Unless the two guys on the right are an integral part of your composition, why not crop them out of erase them?
Rongnongno wrote:
This is a comment on #3.
I looked at this and realized the work - from the bride - that was done...
Color coordinated outfits - Check
Originality of outfits - Check
Similar hairstyles - Check (only one had bangs, but you cannot grow hairs in minutes)
Nail polish are similar with some variation - Check
The neckless are not visible but on three of the bridesmaids, yet on the ceremony they all have the same. Not a check but there too you see the hand of the bride.
Then on YOUR work.
Composition? Great. The flower girl in line with the bride, sitting or kneeling on her back makes the picture.
Lighting? No harsh shadow. Good
Ceasing the moment where all have a good expression? Really nicely done.
You and the bride pulled it off.
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The beach picture? While everything is in focus and well exposed I do not see much at all that is positive.
I have a couple of issues, the raccoon eyes by example.
All my comments would be related to the harshness of the setting but for one...
Unless the two guys on the right are an integral part of your composition, why not crop them out of erase them?
This is a comment on #3. br I looked at this and r... (
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Well I'll tell you why the two were in the background. Although they were not in the wedding party they were good friends of the groom and were a big part of the wedding. I kept them in for that reason alone. I knew the groom would be happy with that.
Thanks for the input though it is appreciated. We wedding photographers know that nothing goes the way you want all the time. This client was super happy with the results and that makes me happy.
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